LaBelle,
Absolutely the right tone and atmosphere here, the images and words chosen so well to convey not just classic romance but classic art. Excellent!
I love the meaning wrapped up nicely in the end of this poem. Your write romance well, not falling into the trap of gushing too much, but rather adding the just right details.
DONE WELL WITH PHRASES PRODUCING BOLD IMAGERY THAT SUPPORT THE THEME WITH STRONG, SOLID RHYTHM. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Beautiful! Well done, Belle; brava! You ARE a classic; and I love you for it!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2009
Ah, I am reading the novel "Tangier," by William Bayer and this exquisite poem took me to the city of intrigue and sat me down in a small, darkened corner as I read and watched the Classic art of love in process. Thank you for the beautiful vission, LLa Belle.
"...when love was a classic art..." have we been left with the dust of it? a chimera? a dream...just a wish?
Perhaps in ancient times love was treated like a precious emotion, today...
Zara’s Bois:
When the powers-that-be make the decision to return a selfish party-girl to Earth on three missions of redemption, can romance and mayhem be far behind? One hot and trendy gay nightclub, two bickering angels and three unlikely p
Zara’s Bois:
When the powers-that-be make the decision to return a selfish party-girl to Earth on three missions of redemption, can romance and mayhem be far behind? One hot and trendy gay nightclub, two bickering angels and three unlikely p
Beautifully done and felt Belle!
Passion Burn Deep here...
I loved it!
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace, and WARM Hugs, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo
Carole~
Absolutely the right tone and atmosphere here, the images and words chosen so well to convey not just classic romance but classic art. Excellent!
John
Be always safe,
Karen
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
hugs
fee
ensconced with Praxilla of Sicyon.
Your work is ordered and colorful.
I have come to expect nothing less from your talented pen
Have a great day
The Buzzard
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0
Perhaps in ancient times love was treated like a precious emotion, today...
Georg