Interesting commentary on intimate moments and I suppose, though it was not defined, the male/female view point on each. For some reason this reminded me of Green Eggs and Ham verses.
LaBelle,
Love the tone of the opening four lines...why not indeed? And then it continues on its marvellous way. You've brightened my morning with your delicious cheek. A gem!
If this doesn't set men's ... um ... to wagging, nothing will! LOL Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2009
La Belle, Why not...I Love it!
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2009
You trickster, I've seen you do this kind of subterfuge before, so I was wary. Turned out I was right to be. Still, it was a cute poem with the misdirection and out and out diversion.
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
Audrey and Sue, both 42, took a trip to England completely paid for by Audrey's cheating millionaire boyfriend. “Cougar” describes older women on the prowl for much younger men, and although they didn't begin the trip on the prowl, somehow they bec
Love the tone of the opening four lines...why not indeed? And then it continues on its marvellous way. You've brightened my morning with your delicious cheek. A gem!
John
Newfie hugs, Rose
hugs
Fee
If this doesn't set men's ... um ... to wagging, nothing will! LOL Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Always,
Deborah
Dance? oooooh you ment thwas was about dancing?...naughty girl!!!!!!!
Georg
cheers,
dan
well penned, La Belle ...
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D