out of time... and out of step
with society that has forfeited
timeless creativity of romance
out of time, stepped our love
amid distant booms of thunder
existing in the electric dreams
circling between kindred hearts
and enfolding psyches securely
within a gossamer veil of stars
out of time but not out of place
love that germinated in antiquity
secretly entwining into crevices
of our yesterdays and tomorrows
like a sweet, invasive jasmine vine
its heady fragrance drifting softly
on breezes of sensual familiarity
penning poetry of many lifetimes
with scarlet ink coursing inward
just the thought of your hands
holding mine through the storm
resurrects hope from her grave
and the tender brush of your lips
against mine in the night of pain
seduces me once again as before
when love was young and vibrant
and all the earth lay within reach
long before we were out of time
Susan, a poignant message crafted gently with inner compassion by your gifted pen my dear friend. The title hangs over my psyche, melancholy, hopeful. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
extraordinary write, la belle. feel every word, every emotion...
now for a hot cup of "dragon tears" jasmine tea and to savor
again the amazing vibration of "out of time."
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Our bodies and even our minds may run out of time with the years advancing but if love is true...it never ages...beautiful poetry as always my friend.
fee
OUT OF TIME, PERHAPS...BUT NEVER, NEVER...OUT OF LOVE. YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN POETESS OF THE HEART. THANK YOU...MUCH. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A coming of age letter with love as the salutation...yesteryear's romance upon the discovery of wine and roses embraced with passion...the memoir lingers, Belle...tender quill rests upon the sake of revival's faith...always your poetry puts me in a nostalgic mood and you're my inspiration for such times...love to you, La Belle.
out of time but not out of place
love that germinated in antiquity
secretly entwining into crevices
of our yesterdays and tomorrows
like a sweet, invasive jasmine vine
its heady fragrance drifting softly
on breezes of sensual familiarity
penning poetry of many lifetimes
with scarlet ink coursing inward
Utterly delicious poetry, Belle! I am painting with similar sable brush strokes this evening! :)) xx
But the beauty of this is that both lovers seem to be "on the same page." Thank you for sharing this romantic offering, Belle. Love and best wishes to you,
Belle, this is exquisite. It's like it was written for me about my very own "yesterdays and tomorrows" .... "long before we were out of time" Super job. Love it.
Thank you Dick.
Reviewed by Judith Ann (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Beautifully written. From your soul, with perfection, feelings seem to flow effortlessly to the tip of your fingers as they convey the message of lost love that still lingers in your heart and brings a tear to our eyes.
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this is gifted thinking and gifted writing with an understanding and maturity that speaks to me far more than you'll ever know.
Bless you!
John
Ron
and the music fits extremely well.
now for a hot cup of "dragon tears" jasmine tea and to savor
again the amazing vibration of "out of time."
peace and blessings,
carolyn
fee
Love,
Sage
love that germinated in antiquity
secretly entwining into crevices
of our yesterdays and tomorrows
like a sweet, invasive jasmine vine
its heady fragrance drifting softly
on breezes of sensual familiarity
penning poetry of many lifetimes
with scarlet ink coursing inward
Utterly delicious poetry, Belle! I am painting with similar sable brush strokes this evening! :)) xx
Love,
Eileen
Regis
Blessings,
Christine
GOD BLESS YOU WITH LOVE
TONY
As always........
~W~
Peace Love and Light
Amber
Love's Bouquet
Vickie
Thank you Dick.