Again, Belle, the power of your words conjures both the fantastic, mystical and mythical AND the potential for actual scenario in terms of the real-life elements of human psyche and relationship. This drags me in as a reader, drags me along with the drama (let alone the brilliant rhyme and metre) so that I, too, feel almost unstoppably compelled by the inevitability of this doom and fate. As the saying goes, nobody does it better! :)) xx
excellent poetry, so very well written and a great story line,
thanks for sharing
regards Steve.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2011
I sense the heart of a cryptic whose sophistication belies a rustic soul. The rhyme is sublime, the cadences full and the parts add up to a greater hole that the heart of your hero can hide. I enjoyed the read, dear Poetess. Looking forward to the next. (not that I'm restless, mind you.)
Belle, this is classical quality poetry, vampire or no -- "they seemed to fling sparks of fire into my core" is positively exquisite and original -- now quickly, grab the pen and freshen the nib with bloody fluid and write on -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
I am reminded of, “An interview with a Vampire,” one of the few of this genre that I like. This one reeks of codependency, good clinging to evil. Richly written, as you usually do.
Red the ink you writhe with, there is a whole horror movie in this short, but oh so skillful allegory, poetry, the time of year is coming to refresh your needs again, good hunting!
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Hauntingly amazing poetry, Belle...as only you can write. I love the way you wrote this, with passion and darkness.
I miss our Halloween bashes...will we ever have one again???
Happy Halloween, and don't stay up too late, my dear..
The Butcher's Boy
- 2011 Readers Favorite Award Silver Medal Winner in Horror - Fiction
A Paranormal/Chiller by Michael Robb
Thirty-one years ago, Buxly the Butcher went to trial for killing h
Always,
Deborah
macabe that you so richly do!!!
~La Belle~
Lady Vivian
thanks for sharing
regards Steve.
Ron
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Hugs! Jasmin Horst
I miss our Halloween bashes...will we ever have one again???
Happy Halloween, and don't stay up too late, my dear..
Peace, love and light,
Amber