What an absolutly beautiful poem, I do love these oldy worldy ones.
you have written it extremely well, I love the story and the rhyme and meter. thank you for sharing.
Steve
This gives one a feeling of being transported to another time and place when life was much simpler then. a little war now and then was a fact of life.....But then thinking about it things haven't changed very much after all.
At least he's home.
Great story.
Who needs a full-length novel when you give us the full cinematic grandeur and the full scope of emotions in just a few, well-wrought lines? Another sigh-inducing narrative from your boundless heart and mind. Such controlled writing, Belle. Masterful use of form. xx
From the ground up this poem is a magnificent structure
of castle and stone and lust and love worthy of the most
romantic among us--and I must say--you've revived all those
compartments in an old warrior. Sigh!
Wow! I can see the warrior was tired and spent from all that warring and traveling because he managed with great fortitude to last for four days and four nights… A remarkable feat that has probably never been achieved again! ;-)
So glad to see you returning to your roots of fine erotic poetry. I don't find the fourth stanza to be true, but it did remind me of, If I Were a Carpenter (and you were a lady).
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you have written it extremely well, I love the story and the rhyme and meter. thank you for sharing.
Steve
A lovely fair of purple heather moors for
such a Scotia tale. Beautiful beyond.
Lady Mary Ann
Regis
Diana...
on fire...The lady of romance does it again!
Always,
Deborah
At least he's home.
Great story.
Walt
of castle and stone and lust and love worthy of the most
romantic among us--and I must say--you've revived all those
compartments in an old warrior. Sigh!
Michael D.
So glad to see you returning to your roots of fine erotic poetry. I don't find the fourth stanza to be true, but it did remind me of, If I Were a Carpenter (and you were a lady).
Ron