Lost Virginity (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Lovely: rhythmicity and rhyme.
Romance and love have come to bloom, defining essence of the womb; the act once done is not reversed, when finally lust has done its worst.
K2

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 15, 2008

An excellent write Becca
Peace & love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on February 13, 2008

There is sadness in your words. To wonder. To seek and reach. Would that she had waited 'til married before she sought to be mated, elated. A perspective I had not considered Becca. Your poem took much thought to covey the exact messsage you sought to share. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 13, 2008

If I may!!

~� Woman�~

No celebration time
No wait... No!!
Not a joyful occasion
From girl to woman
Sudden wet eyed whisper
Is that virginity
Innocence cries out
Before she knew
The miracle pass
No soft reception
Infant guide
Male contentment
Girl became
W
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Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

BECCA - WELL DONE! VERY POIGNANT!

As they say at Graduations - "this is not an end, but a beginning."

The Beginning of Womanhood ... another cycle of Nature. Tom.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

One of your finest Becca.

Walt

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

Lovely verses and rhythm, I enjoyed this poem very much. I like your style!
Much Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

Nature usually does take its course, in all things in life.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

Becca,

The rhyme and flow were perfect.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

It reminds me of ......... my own loss of virginity. There is a sadness in this memory. Not quite what I'd expected.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

A poetic yet realistic account of the feelings and attraction and how it all takes place. Virginity is a loss only when girls are taught that this is somethis essential that they have to keep. Without such pressure, it isn't much. A detail in a blossoming sex life! Full of discoveries ahead...

Axilea

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

Great poetry..
Today's time and many think, I wonder what a virgin is?
Wth love,
Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

Ah to seduce the heart of one so lovely and win the right to kiss the sweet virginity of her blossoming youth...sweet write snuggles.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

Very tastefully written piece of trials and tribualtions induced by love or wanting of....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 11, 2008

a very sensuous write-wonderfully penned