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Sailing as One
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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This is a somewhat longer, and much happier, version of a poem that I posted some time back. Let me know what you think. xOx 'Pea' xOx

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The little red boat.
The fishermen.
Sun turning lemon.
Water flump, flump, flumping
against the fiberglass hull
as if a seal has mistaken it
for a ball.
We are at the quiet end,
I remember.
I remember
you pretending to love the bikini
I sewed.   Discount seersucker,
yellow and white stripes.
You are plastered with sunscreen
to keep from burning.    Army
examiner once put down
“complexion, ruddy.”  We laugh
about it to this day.  We are at
Lake Jordan, our favorite.
I remember.
I remember
casting off.  A woman puts down
a pail and points at us.  “Too
dinky to be a boat.”  she razzes.
“Ask me, it’s a biscuit tray!”
But sail, we do.  After a fashion.
Sailors, we ain’t.   Ask the three
beered-up fishers who row  by
as we attempt to tack.   “Aren’t
married, I can tell,” the one in the
Duke cap shouts.  “Too happy!” 
You wave your left hand, then I do.
Sunlight makes our wedding bands
give off sparks.  Time to take turns
stretching out to catch rays.  Flump,
flump, flump.  Newly pregnant cloud
scuds near, we zig and zag slapstick
style, finally make it to shore.
Next  day at work I show off my new
vocabulary.  “Tacking is for the  birds!” 
Then, Love, I remember
adding. “Rain starts to spit, we are,
like,  h e l p !”   “We” part feels
so good, I can’t stop repeating.
I remember.
I remember the best part
is showering with you after.
The mesmerizing tingle.  The sudden
discovery we ’re not tired, after all.
Best part, did I say?   Reserve that
for remembering together,
Love,
as we sail the best we can
into the sunset,  basking
on sun- and moon-catching waves
of two become
One.

 

 

For Ray    (c) Phyllis Jean Green,   April, 2010


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 Reviews of "Sailing as One"
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
Whatever floats your boat must be good stuff, and this is certainly good stuff. I could sense that there was a boat not meant to do so well--that, in fact, did. That part had me a bit stressed at the journey's length, so, I pulled the covers over my head while continuing to watch. But, there was excellent relief after the look of the storm gave escape intentions, and the two of you did so; of course, the ending--well, the ending is very much priceless ....

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 1, 2010
IT IS THOSE...SEEMINGLY...LITTLE 'THINGS' THAT BIND AND CONNECT...ISN'T IT? WHAT A MARVELOUS PROSE WORK THAT IS SO FULL OF THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY...THAT SATISFIES. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on April 9, 2010
Jealous, Pea, of having loved, of having lived, of having penned an amazing poem - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
Very amazing write here, Phyllis..I really enjoyed reading it!

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
Phyliss Jean, a seasoned sailor you may not have been -- but with the romance that followed, who would have cared about the sailing --"frump, frump, frump, little red boat" -- peace ansd love be with you my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed on April 7, 2010
dancing in the waves
a sweet poem Sweet Pea
Love & Zephyrs Upon Your Sails

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
I love it! Especially this:

You wave your left hand, then I do.
Sunlight makes our wedding bands
give off sparks.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
I think this is a lovely remembering and i love the style you have chosen to use to tell this sweet story

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
You've merged style and substance into beauty. Bravo.
“We” part feels
so good,

What a great line! Wow.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
Love the whimsical fun way this story and poem unwinds...it is so easy to grasp on to it and be there in the boat with you. As one who loves the sea and loves sailing I can sooo see the frustration of novice sailors trying to tack from point A to Point C to get to point B...lol
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 6, 2010
"But sail, we do"...and so you do, Pea, in the little red boat of fine touch and romance. Ray is lucky!

John

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on April 6, 2010
I missed your first poem. However I did like this one very much. It was well crafted.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 6, 2010
Sweet Pea! I love the substance expressed via your verses here. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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