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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Funhouse Distortion

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Self examination comes in many forms.

Wednesday, May 15, 2013


Poem Artwork
Funhouse Distortion
by Odin Roark

I once stood proudly
Beside the giants
Whose distorted rule
Still fosters garish giggles
Occasional oohs and ahs

Other reflections
Render bodies will-o'-the-wisp acceptable
Bringing fun lovers to a halt
Finding such representation pacifying
Given failed diet regimens

How frightening I have become
For many rushing past
Even as my wave of semblance
Cracked by diagonal accident
Allows any undulating split personality
To see itself
Perhaps for the first
And...
Last time

Before me
A gangly girl pauses
Stares at reflection
Her tilted head separated from body
I empathize with mute understanding
If only I could speak
You can lean against my shoulder
It's okay. It's okay.

Outside
The exit fat lady automaton
Jeers with laughter 


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Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2013
Freaks can be very interesting after all, as many of us remind ourselves when we look in the mirror...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 16, 2013
To use the word fun house for the tragicomic world of the freak show reveals our baser side. There isn't much fun in the world of freaks.

However, I've often found that authors here view themselves through rose colored glasses and distorted mirrors to their own detriment. It sure helps to have a good understanding of oneself before going out into the world and leaving the fun house behind.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 16, 2013
hmmm i different way of self examination
budd


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