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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· A Place...

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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Love LIke a Sweater

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It’s easy to forget love has many forms.

Wednesday, May 22, 2013


Poem Artwork
Love Like a Sweater
by Odin Roark

The aged veteran sits idly
Upon rocker and barren porch
Remembering

Unlike a space suit
Its every fiber fit
By rigid standard

Unlike the starched khaki shirt
Its extremities forged firm as armor
Its pleats kept at attention

Unlike the dress blues
Symbolic of authority and command
Unyielding in its façade of glory

The sweater
Like love
Molds to behavior
Forever willing to comfort the flesh
And bring warmth to the heart

As passion's woven threads
Assimilate the wearer's hardships
Fear of frayed ends disappear
Accepting entwined living
Is not without accident and wear

Affection asks little in return
Needing only to be spared
The folding into a drawer
Of forgotten memories

Given care
The patience of love
Remains forever dedicated
Embracing any and all it touches

And like the tattered loyal sweater
Judges not the body
But dutifully complies
Abiding the ever shrinking collapse
Of life fully lived

The veteran rocks slowly to sleep
His sweater held close


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Reviewed on June 1, 2013
adore this. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on May 23, 2013
Nicely rendered, Odin, and timed just right for Memorial Day weekend. I'm not there quite yet, but that guy lives in my 'neighborhood' and I've seen glimpses of him ... thanks.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 22, 2013
Odin,

Outstanding write, Odin. This brought me to tears. So many memories inside his head as he rocks slowly to sleep with the comfort of his sweater and the veil of sleep.

Love and blessings,
+Linda

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2013
formlessness surpasses all...

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on May 22, 2013
well done--I was a Nursing orderly in a veterans ward for 13 years and I would say you captured the veteran perfectly

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 22, 2013
~Odin~
Beautiful "Love Like a Sweater". Given care the patience of love
remains forever dedicated..embracing any and all it touches.

Lady Mar Ann

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 22, 2013
this is an unexpected lovely write my friend
budd


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