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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Bubbledom

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To live in the insidious bubble that perpetuates fantasy at the expense of living life in all its threatening splendor is truly a questionable choice.

Tuesday, October 1, 2013


Poem Artwork
Bubbledom
by Odin Roark

How frothy
That first taste
When some upper layer
Seems the treat d’ jour

Whether in big business
Big politics
Big Hollywood
Or Wall Street
Aspirations to be part of that bubble
Prove anything but frothy

How seductive the connection
To feel complete
Without threat from the outside
Without knowledge of collateral lives

Such an existence
Seemingly insulated from jeopardy
Ignores outside reality
Shuns cognizance of truth

Lines swell
Vicarious pursuit grows
So many now crowd inside the bubble
That never pops

Until it does


 


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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 3, 2013
Such an existence
Seemingly insulated from jeopardy
Ignores outside reality
Shuns cognizance of truth

Sounds just like our pompous, without a clue, living in a bubble, so called 'leaders' today. "We're shutting down the government because the people want us to!"

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 2, 2013
A well rounded metaphor topped with chocolate sprinkles. People do love their bubbles! I have a friend who sends "love and peace" to others using his bubbles. Perhaps there are other ways they can be used. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 2, 2013
You have struck on a major human infallibility. We know our demise. We know we will die. We just don't see it coming.

The largest bubble I see is the ballooning human population… reaching unsustainable, unless relieved by most of the inhabitants leaving the planet Earth for the solar system.

And the most vulnerable of all? The bubble called New York City, its spires about to poke a hole in its sources of sustenance. NYC's life blood can be cut off very easily and all would either have to flee or die.

All of the long gone ancient civilizations and cities bear testimony to many bubbles that burst in the past.

As always, a very thoughtful write.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 2, 2013
Ahhh . . . choo . . . Don't sneeze . . . Or talk too loud . . . Cause, don't ya know . . . The bubble will BURST . . .

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 2, 2013
it will burst
budd

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 1, 2013
If I could follow all the tentacles of your words would I find a wise philosopher eating a bowl of soup, or just sitting there staring into space and laughing his ass off? My imagination leads me toward the latter.


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