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Hiss

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With climate change and its increasing summer droughts, we urban folks can only imagine the plight for some.

Tuesday, April 8, 2014


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Hiss
by Odin Roark

A surgeon lifts him
From cesarean he is born
To rationed surroundings
He does begin

Acres of annual dried and broken corn stalks
Become his home
Planting always hopeful
Harvest always dreadful
Market forever questionable

Living his farming gamble
Forty years would pass
Rows always hoed
Life’s water forever short
Empty living persisted long

Hands and heart
Like the earth he so loved
Dried
Cracked
Longed for reward

Lying down seemed easy
Away from cursed tractor
Plough
Paint-blistered farmhouse

Here between the rutted stalks
He did give himself
To become of value
To enjoin with nature
To offer his outstretched body
And wait

Cycles of night and day
Passed peacefully
His breath became quiet
Then short
Then…

Death visited on that year’s day of storm
As the life-force touched down
Becoming a final mantra
Droplets tried to awaken
The man beneath a peaceful smile
But the dry earth’s hiss of thank you
Was all to be heard
    


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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 9, 2014
So very sad - but the urban folk are not immune to the cursed results of these ever increasing droughts today - less and less food is being produced, and there are more and more hungry mouths to feed in today's cities.

Reviewed on April 8, 2014
Farming is fun, it has its good days, and the bad days as well. Both sunshine, and water play an important part of the good harvest. Too much or too little of either is not good for reaping a good harvest. That is why many farmers have developed self-assessment method to foretell the weather as well.

Sandie

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2014
I could not think of a better title for this poem. The irony of the rain too late made for a smothering tragedy that ecompasses much more than this situation's outcome for this one man or this one place. What hit me was the line: "To become of value," moreso in organic matter than a life. "Life's water forever short," says everything. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 8, 2014
Farming is often in the blood, for good or bad - mostly bad these days if you're a small holder who is not able to comply with the demands of buyers and subsidy-granters. My heart goes out to my ancestors on the Somerset Levels here in the UK who have been at the opposite end of the climate-change spectrum this past pitiless winter. Much is still under water and lands totally ruined - let alone the dispersal of sick and injured stock. What is the needed life-force in one part is now the dreaded plague of another - yet even as this dear soul departed from the life he had known and had been born into, perhaps at last he and his land were one in the knowledge of 'peace'. Powerful and poignant as always, Odin. xx

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 8, 2014
so very deep and in touch
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 8, 2014
Farm Aid seems to be more needed than ever. Yesterday, I watched a History Channel discussion of how the wobbling of the Earth's axis brings alternate periods of monsoon and drought to the Sahara desert. An archaeologist was studying a village that had been inhabited twice, once about 6000 years ago and then again about 12,000 years ago beside a large lake in the middle of the Sahara. The only choice for these people and those of the Depression Dustbowl was to migrate. It may happen again here in the United States. Many people are fleeing California for economic reasons to drought prone Texas. If the predictions are correct, we may see a mass migration to where the water is.

Thank you for the stark, realistic depiction of what lack of water brings.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 8, 2014
Somewhat different for you, Odin, but was certainly tuned into the plight of the farmer and their dependence upon rainfall which sometimes holds back on the giving of it.


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