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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Gray's Lonely Light

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As the holiday season approaches and mental afflictions make their annual spike, for some of us more fortunate than others relative to peace of mind, compassion becomes a dominant reminder, asking we consider more of what hopeless sadness might be like and perhaps reach out with a helpful hand. (Image by fubiz)

Friday, December 11, 2015


Poem Artwork
Gray’s Lonely Light
by Odin Roark

Dark-clouded sunrises happen,
when sanity relies only on hope,
where sudden light can sear the mind’s cornea,
rain make murky the vision,
air carry only odorous threats
of anticipated pain,
engulfed in the gray of endless boundaries.

Such becomes an artifice
realized in the mind's solitary struggle.

From birth to death,
parental captivity
to corporate slavery,
through familial dissonance
to homeless escape,
an acquiescence
battles tenacity's belligerence.

Gradually…

Ethereal puppet strings
once holding,
begin to break,
dangling lifeless willpower.

Struggling efforts
grovel among the world’s residuum,
where solipsism reigns
and munificence cowers with fear,
leaving the running, crawling, stumbling
of mind’s dwindling reserves
once again considering the conquering odds,
and perhaps a compassionate hand in the dark.

All as the day’s clouded sun sets.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 11, 2015
A psychological delving into the deep depression that some feel when overwhelmed with what life has thrown at them. Very insightful… Coloring the gray very well.

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on December 11, 2015
It is hard being trapped wthin society's ideals and your own.. When instinct had long told you there is something wrong.. You just wanna break free from all unnecessary attachments which deemed important by many except you.. This is rather inspiring as not many unveiled the matrix of servitude.. It is a sweet reminder to us, poets and artists, however few, are not alone.. Thank you..

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 11, 2015
No one can piece together word tapestries that can elicit mental images and evoke emotions quite the way you can. One that encapsulates an entire life's struggles between sunrise and sunset is testimony to the need to keep this art form alive and well.


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