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Lost Street

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Getting old and all the accompanying decay is not for sissies. (Image by Pinterest)

Monday, February 6, 2017


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Lost Street
by Odin Roark

Why must there be the “old days,”
where running into anyone familiar is nowhere,
while humid summer heat makes it harder to find the past?

As I search…

Gone are the apartments houses of yesterday,
the stores, office buildings…everything so unfamiliar now,
even the trees in the park I remember so small compared to now,
and the birds so quiet,
as if in hiding.

Signs shows every bus re-routed.
Removed are the vegetable and fruit stands.
Fewer are the bargain haircuts.

Where is the school yard with its graffiti covered fence
and smog covered windows where Miss Burns
always stayed late to grade papers?

“Damn it. Where is my street?”

Maybe I should retrace my footsteps,
give the neighborhood another look,
find someone who might show me the way,
and maybe a place to lay down for a long sleep,
since my ticket was only one-way
wherever I came from at dawn.


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Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 11, 2017
It's been many years since I last visited my old neighborhood.

Reviewed on February 8, 2017
This reminds me of the song by the Pretenders, "I went back to Ohio but my city was gone.............". Excellent poem and you got your point across in a fine fashion.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on February 7, 2017
I would not underestimate the sissies, especially from/in Asian countries who look like a fair maiden first to kick then any badass from the west with no delay. Most of them do not care of death and very much patient; what's more, the aging is more than a natural process for them religiously and ideologically. . . if we speak of the courage to live, that's not regarding those people who are unleashed now to win the world by all means. Since the time has been lost for the games of democracy, even the radical measures today will not be helpful in the situation we are all in. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 7, 2017
Reminded me (as I read) of the Blind Faith song: 'Can't find my way home.' Go figure. It's paradoxical that the idea of living a long life appeals to everyone, but the idea of getting old doesn't appeal to anyone. Hahaha (-: Enjoyed this semi-transparent lament. Peace. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 7, 2017
A telling tale of the price of aging, beautifully wrought. Yes, we all will travel down that street unless we are snatched by "unfortunate" early death. I am amazed how little I have found the elderly complain about their situation. Perhaps it is because I am removed from them now but am beginning to feel the effects of age and am not liking it one bit. Still, when in the presence of others I always smile and say, "I'm fine." Even though I can see my world unraveling around the edges.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on February 7, 2017
Shel Silverstein wrote, They're tearing down buildings I watched them build. It's just time. And I never say "old days", It's" back in the day"

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 6, 2017
Fine nostalgia trip. I have had recent experiences on the internet where sudden link ups with ancient friends produces a flutter of greetings which quickly die again into the netherworld of forgotten memories. John

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 6, 2017
I pass through my hometown once every few years to see all the people I don't know, in buildings that I have never been in, talking about things of which I know nothing. Then I wander to that tiny little spot that once supported a small house that was torn down so very long ago where all my youthful memories are frozen like ancient ghosts. There is not a hint of laughter, or caring, or anything that suggests life, love, or purpose. I walk away asking myself "why do I bother?"

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 6, 2017
"Getting old and all the accompanying decay is not for sissies"

You flat out got that right, and as far as the poem itself . . . as "they" say . . . right on, bro! Heh.Heh


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