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Honeybee Inocence Remembered

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How easy it is for some to cast aside early lessons, while others...

Friday, April 21, 2017


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Honeybee Innocence Remembered
by Odin Roark

The colony was prepared
for the thousands of fellow creatures
about to respectfully deposit their wealth,
their joyful survival.

The boy had trod on the simple life of gathering,
bringing about pain from the bee that meant no harm,
the creature merely reacting
as she gathered love for the colony,
ultimately giving her life to defend.

Now limping up the dandelion carpeted hill
the 5-year old’s foot throbbed with the sting’s pain,
unaware he was experiencing something more than pain,
a cherished lesson he would comprehend later.

A bee.

A boy.

A difficult understanding…for now.

How foreign this encounter remained.
The boy grew and a man emerged,
discovering stings of the heart and mind
far out-pained the innocent bee’s barbed defense.

In spite of the gathering years,
the encounter stayed with him,
as he carefully trod down the dusty road
of hidden IED threats,
where determining innocent human beings from hostiles
was a matter of living or dying.

That one honeybee,
that one entity that meant no harm,
remained the death that started a lesson,
the defensive sacrifice he dwelled on,
strangely maintaining that long ago stinging sensation
to the foot and leg he no longer had.

How simple the dandelion experience.
How complex the lesson. 


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 23, 2017
Yes, with Nature it's "walk softly" but
with man it's "walk softly and carry a big stick."

Reviewed on April 22, 2017
there are no easy lessons as the whole idea of our existence is how to recover from a fall. Cheers, alex


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 22, 2017
A beautifully wrought analogy between early lessons of accidentally stepping on danger and the plight of the soldier who has to go into battle in places where he knows that booby-traps away him at every turn with every foot fall.

My brother and I were once accompanying our grandfather when he turned over an old rotting for some reason. The move unleashed a swarm of angry hornets. My brother and I ran as fast as we could and actually outran them so we didn't get stung. Grandfather just stood there laughing as he watched all the wasps chase us instead of their tormentor, standing still.

The lesson I learned that day was that most creatures in nature chase. If you stand your ground you're likely not to get hurt.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 21, 2017
Ah, the honeybee and its golden nectar, how I love it. Charming story. John

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on April 21, 2017
Excellent write. Deep and profound. As I read this, I was remembering the stings I received.

Reviewed on April 21, 2017
It's when we meet atrocities and heartbreak later in life the little things that happened long ago don't even matter anymore. Great moral here!!

Love ya!

Jane


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