Mystic Fly Casting Revisited
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
When staring upward, we sometimes forget how valuable our nighttime fantasized perspective aids our everyday reality.
Tuesday, August 21, 2018
Mystic Fly Casting Revisited
Once the boy made fly hooks
after school for ten cents a hook.
Big money then
for big dreams... then.
Now the boy a vintage man
has only nocturnal dreams
needing little money... now.
How prescient he thinks,
staring up at ceiling images,
casting his line out into the dark,
like hooks needing to catch new dreams,
the ones swimming freely for the taking,
his heart the willing bait.
Night after night,
his inner feelings a tether,
floats beyond his past
until unknown stars
blink their infinite welcome.
His spirit takes heed,
the line reeled out to its end,
the hook’s purposeful drift
bringing a sigh to his throat.
Up there,
the stars, like other fishermen of providence,
pepper his longing with their inherent sparkle,
like the surface of a great lake reflecting its surroundings,
an invitation to join in their celestial campfire,
allowing the embers and flames to ignite dreams never waned,
even when often flickering of a dim flame.
Is it the pumping heart that keeps dancing
the lure that makes the pull-in so rewarding,
the catch and release so needed
in keeping alive the dreams?
It’s late…
His eyes flutter,
as the hook, now a dangling shadow in the abyss,
finds respite ‘til another night.
A perplexed moth and spider,
gaze down from the ceiling.
The man recedes into sleep,
a mystical abandonment enveloping
his smiling eyelids.
Love ya!
Jane
Cheers,
Dan
The above line is the catalyst which gives the man his dreams and carries him into a world he envisions, but never can connect to when he is awake. His dreams can only come alive within his nocturnal dreams.
But your prosetry this time is much more profound. In between the frenetic activity of your brain during the day and the peaceful (or fretful) of the night, you are casting out your lures of enticement to a starry sky invented in the ceiling of imagination to catch those prize fishes in a sea of many. Bravo!
Ron