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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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-For so many, the threat of death, the biding of time ‘til the final breath, is an unnecessary downer. We should never forget, it’s not over ‘til it’s over. (Image by Simon Winnal)

Thursday, October 31, 2019


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Countdown

 

On her deathbed,

Grandma grins at her old dog Ben lying next to her

Having another of his daily jerk-dreams

 

Infinity, Time’s silent one,

Listens in

 

Layered generations hover about the bed

Like moths around an oil lamp

Grandchildren hug legs and skirts of mothers

Sensing the haunting quiet of sadness

 

Grandma squints at the disquieting movement

 

Moist flutterings eyelids

Pulsing jaws

Gripping of the Bible

Wringing of a hankie

A teen’s twisting a Rubik’s cube

 

A Blue Jay calls out from a distant tree

No one hears

 

There is radiance in her last moment

Like backlit dandelion-fluff taking flight from its origin

She expels her last breath

A weak, but determined expression on her face

Resistance rising into a new iteration

 

Ben’s head lifts

His eyes drift from the bed to the ceiling

His paw rests on Grandma’s hand

Countdown over

 

 



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Reviewed on November 1, 2019
Your words touched my heart, Odin! I can "see" it all right up to the moment a relaxed, nearly relieved look crosses the face of the traveler.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 1, 2019
An engaging piece that easily immerses the reader in the gist. The images are perfect. One of your very best. Well done. Thank you for sharing. r

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 1, 2019
An awesome write Odin
Been to a few of your well penned described scenes
Always tell myself , that’s my last but find myself in another
I don’t wish for them to depart without my final gentle hug and Kids
As I walk away neither a tear in my eyes......
thank you Odin for this piece
Peace be with you.

William

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 1, 2019
Well written and very touching. This one put a lump in my throat.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 31, 2019
Beautifully envisioned, expertly described. Very touching poem of the final hour and second. Everything understand to make its powerful impact. Excellent.


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