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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Critical Thinking Solitaire

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are times when to challenge the mind and heart, one must negate the dealer’s control, the sleight of hand deceit, and indulge in…. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, November 24, 2019


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Critical Thinking Solitaire

 

 


How timid the first few lay-downs.

 

Then, life’s metaphors come into play.

From where does the storm's purchase begin?
Does lightning need the thunder?
Does passion need boredom's consent?


Or…


Is passion inherent in breathing,
Even for those who would spend their lives suffocated
By their own unwillingness to breathe?

Might the newborn sense such complacency?
This breathing of one's conditioned breath,
Unable to define one's own place,
Shackled by other grown-up's lexiconic understanding,
Open-ended description kept isolated,

But by the hindrance to growth?

But to not know,
Feel,
Anticipate your personal flesh and suckling needs,
Growing up will be a bitch,

The downer of downers..

Might acquiescence then take over?

Who wants it to grow up anyway?
Better to be kept corralled within a society of ignorant parents,
Controlled,
Led,
Kept in stalls of mediocrity,
Risking no loss,
No gain,
No disappointment.

But…

Someday one will lament Peggy’s lyrics:
“Is that all there is?”

And if one is lucky,
There will be a light..

The searing heat of the unknown,
The eruption,
The liquid seduction of indolent rain,
The feel of moist warmth beneath your limbs
As you lay upon the earth to reflect.

Answers to the unanswerable
Might begin to seep upward,
Revealing direction still available.

Will you be willing to listen?
To see?
To awaken to unfamiliar sunrises?

Ah…

The deep breath.


The throw down of a winning card.

Enlightenment?

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 24, 2019
There are so many out there who are not "willing to listen? To see? To awaken to unfamiliar sunrises?" Then they miss out on the wealth of which you write.

Reviewed on November 24, 2019
In the words of Peter Pan, "I won't grow up!"..........Odin, that's my "winning card"! Interesting and enjoyable write!!

Love ya!

Jane


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