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Dilacerated World

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Welcome to 2022. One can only hope global surgery will repair and provide new growth to a globe in mayhem and denial of reality’s lessons to learn. (Art by John Pitre)

Saturday, January 1, 2022


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Dilacerated World

 

Try as we might

There is difficulty

Praising the world’s dismemberment

 

One can hope

For a return to…

 

One’s white room

With ocean breezes billowing the curtains

Their flutter seeming like wistful thinking now

Even as we try and wish back

The concert where horn and string found harmony

As we nodded acceptance of the counterpoint connection.

 

But…

 

We’ve also watched refugees finding nowhere for asylum

Heard executioners gleefully rejoice in ending a life

While we

Knowing better

Hesitate to have our voices heard

Fearful of retribution

From forces we fear are merely waiting

To add another notch on their belt of conquest.

 

Yet…

 

We can also recall the times when the world

Exercised greater humanity

With simple togetherness

Gathering compassionate heartfelt colors

Eddying over earth’s infected contamination

While the gray feather of a sparrow

Floated its natural molting continuum

Through the gentle light shivers

On through branches

Vanishing

Returning

To share warmth with what has become

A dilacerated world

Growing increasingly cold

Oh so icy cold.

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 3, 2022
Your thoughts in this poem about the world are spot on. We are actually in a dire situation, here in the US, but also around the entire glove, what with global warming, and crazy politics in many places, a result no doubt, of the "lack of humanity" of which you speak. Not a great way to start the new year. Hope to be surprised.

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2022
We are battling between good and evil and God always wins because darkness was defeated over 2 thousand years ago. If we offer hope to at least one person today it can ripple. Great sentiments in this pen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 1, 2022
Yes, more and more it seems to be them versus us as the world's crowded nations seek relief by the old method of conquering territory and subjecting the occupants to slavery. But you can add a greater danger, procrastination, by all who see the handwriting on the wall. Holding out for what? A losing hand?

I remain optimistic like so many that we can prevail as soon as we see the clear danger. The other night I watched three programs on PBS that clearly showed us, that the world is not as your two last lines indicate (maybe an attitude) but hotter than we ever expected, perhaps headed to an atmosphere like that imaginary beauty, Venus. Books will burn despite huge efforts to save them.

Ron


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