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Exhuming Buried Feelings

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Relationships often meet untimely deaths and are buried and gone before thorough analysis and discovery are made. In many such situations, the unearthing of the experience takes unanticipated courage and trust… knowing answers may or may not make themselves known. For growth, one must take risks and exhume the past. (Painting by Jenot Jean Marie)

Wednesday, December 14, 2022


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Exhuming Buried Feelings

 

How deep the abyss of love’s precipitous graveyard,

A place that at high noon realizes light-shedding mistakes

Becomes defenseless as the shadows of hiding have nowhere to go.

 

Fearful of creating more of the same,

Man holds securely the remaining strands

Of rappelling hope,

Where fibers of youthful safety

Once so secure,

Now of tenuous scarred forewarning.

 

How arid the updraft

Of seeming bottomless graves,

Reminding the descent

Mistakes and regrets

Maintain vigilance

In this landscape

Of life’s efforts,

Mistakes,

And failures,

Are but lessons needing to be learned.

 

To reach the bottom,

Exhume the remains of errors in judgment,

Lessons having had time

For knowledge to secure purchase

Wisdom’s possibility

May be rendered at last.

 

Oh, how unearthing the remnants

Of misguided and ill-timed determination

Exalts the spirit within,

Where ethereal judgment

Understands reprieve,

Forgiving the child in the man,

And the innocence of growth,

To have a final chance.

To heal a part of the  infallibility of humankind.

 

Here…

 

Might such an unearthing lead one

To trails yet to discover,

Highways awaiting smooth transit

Into Man’s destiny now in hand,

Where fate having had its chance,

Succumbs to the dream of bliss

Within one’s learned lessons of growth.

 

To be given such opportunity,

Bestows confirmation of life’s forensics,

Those often hidden,

Buried,

And seemingly impossible clues to answers.

 

One is reminded

Fulfillment of  joy and happiness

Is forever available.

 

We only have to risk the effort

To actuate the lessons.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 14, 2022
Funny quirk of mine, to often start reading a new contribution by reading the reviews first. It does two things: shows me the angle maybe not mentioned yet, and shapes what I may write in contrast or harmony with other reviews. This ‘Exhuming Buried Feelings’ holds a host of stark and tumultuous concepts, and offers oxygen, as with “….realizes light-shedding mistakes” and “To trails yet to discover,/Highways awaiting smooth transit”…all of stanza 5. The image primed me for a disparaging and remorseful reading experience, but the words were full of courage and purpose. Always a neat part of posts here is seeing what image is chosen and how it is tethered or severed from the text. I’m glad we have that pairing opportunity. Odin, your last two lines here are ‘another’ one of your resonating finishes worthy of a tattoo — “We only have to risk the effort….” I treasure that concept. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 14, 2022
From what little I know of your life, you have a lot of excavating to do. But that's what wisdom is. The rethinking of the way one's life was lived and coming up with discoveries that wise men/women pass down to younger generations hoping that they won't repeat what has been experienced with the pain it brought.

Makes me a bit fearful of our younger, innocent youth, now confronted with fentanyl or some other candy colored or slipped into drink, drug, at a party. A lesson that could prove life damaging or even death.

Ron

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on December 14, 2022
Life is about learning, failed relationships are just the same. Practice makes perfect. I love the symbolism in this piece. And the painting is the perfect match to go with it.


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