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Beyond the Quiet

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With man positioned to launch the Artemis flight to the Moon in 2025-26; Musk prepares to launch the largest rocket ever, “Starship”; and Jupiter awaits the arrival of “juice” launched a few days ago on the first exploration of Jupiter and its moons, one can’t help but wonder of the many dark places we have yet to discover, both inside and outside our realm of present understanding and ability. (Painting by Jorm Sangsorn)

Monday, April 17, 2023


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Beyond the Quiet

 

While neuroscience probes deeper
Into that place beyond quiet,
Where radiator rumble
Refrigerator hum,
And pipe rattling
Ceases to be,
The why of our hidden thinking core
May remain undiscovered.

 

Even as a dog knows
Beneath opening and closing yawns
An alley cat fathoms all
While cleaning silently in the night,

Adults know little
Of the silence of thought beyond the now,
Save the innate noise that precedes
Pursuit of such quiet revealing.

 

Perhaps…

 

Insight remains reluctant,
Fearful of its own discovery,
Where lexicons unknown
Will articulate shadowed inflorescence,
Where blooms of vision will implore
Just as a baby discerns
Sight's first experience
And pleads for more.

 

Innocence

 

Always tenuous,
Remains accessible to the courageous
Returning the joy of awe
To those fearless of time.

 

And we…

 

Can only wonder

If destiny's dawn reveals
A rare sense of security
When serenity becomes fate's guide into darkness,
Where for the moment
Light may continue sleeping.

 

My, my…

 

How noisy might silence remain tomorrow?



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 18, 2023
I must admit, while I'm working during the day, I am very focused. Closing out all but the loudest sounds and thoughts to accomplish what I'm doing. But at night, in my dreams, while some, particularly the very rare nightmares, refer to something I recently did, most of my dreams are completely from out of the blue, discovering ideas for stories, poems and even songs. And they are very busy--I can't shut them off until I wake up. Most of them, I want to continue to follow, as noisy as they are, they don't wake me up.

The amount of knowledge is growing as you have described in your prose, and the human brain is massively capable as it is. But not enough to store it all through all the noise of emerging current events. Back around 20 years ago I started relying on Internet searches to find facts or verify them. Before that, I had to go to a library or use one of the outdated, always outdated, encyclopedias to get my answers. Often, while quietly pursuing my need, with my brain noisily trying to find the right route to my discovery, I was sidetracked or even didn't find anything after four or five hours of inquiry.

I think that AI has come along just in time to make our minds capable of learning anything from the rapidly growing knowledge base. I can't help think about how much noise is going to the minds of those computers as they gather daily the entire world's information and neatly stored where it can be found 300 years from now.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 18, 2023
Yes, it seems that animals know all they need to know from some knowledge derived from instinct, therefore don't question, complain or doubt. We on the other hand have a tendency to think we know when in fact we know so little. Your poem raises a number of compelling issues with sensitivity and insight.

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on April 17, 2023
Beyond the quiet for me is those moments of mindfulness when the mind is completely free of any thought process and float around light as a feather in perfect peace. There is something so magical in that its hard to describe in words.


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