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Burden's Insight

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Today, it is arguable that the world’s delusional addiction will continue to vanquish reality’s purpose until we become fully conscious.

Tuesday, April 9, 2024


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Burden’s Insight

How rapid their collection
From nasty medicines
Cloaked with mother’s smile
To spoonful upon mouthfuls,
Handfuls to bucketsful,
Becoming boulders of experience
Upon one’s shoulders.

How innocent they approach,
These illusions of surety.
Where certainty of rest and peace
Evaporates like vanishing rabbits in a hat.

Life’s landscape

A parent’s belief,
A child’s trust,
A teacher’s urging,
A boss’s mind-game,
A relationship’s oasis.

Eventually

The undulating future flattens,
Erosion’s desert wind catches up,
The parched soul forgets thirst,
Realizes that which weighs down its back
Has made but a packhorse of the seeker.

Nodding exhaustion’s acquiescence,
Hauntings swirl upward,
Sands of the past
Readily make way for tomorrow’s footprints.

For the fortunate

Insight makes light the burden,
Revealing future’s road paved with perception,
Rousing the traveler from a nightmarish-mirage

To an awakening insight,

Reality’s embrace of certitude

Becoming a oneness with imagination,

A lifting of the burden,

An awakening of strength.

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 10, 2024
There is a marked difference between 'burdens' and loads, and when that distinction gets blurred, we can do more harm than good. Love (Agape) demands that we share one another's burdens, but not carry each others loads, which begs the question: when should we ask for help, and when should we refuse it? No man is an island. Certainly each one should test their own actions, then they can take pride in themselves alone, without comparing themselves to others. Sometimes though, when we help bear each others burdens, both parties can be blessed and helped. Enjoyed your insight. Peace.... r


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