The moment our eyes met there was a twinkle as a instant glow appeared upon my face. Then you gave such a bright smile saying, “Hello”, as my heart fluttered and I of course stuttered becoming totally mesmerized.
When softly you touched my face, as I began to shake and you asked me on a date.
Suddenly I noticed that you were not a fake and this was no joke as you showed such charm and within minutes I was nestled tightly under your arms.
Becoming even more nervous and tongue tide as you sure took it with stride and soon we were on an adventurous ride. I held onto you ever so tightly as the motorcycle roared and you told me just how much I was adored.
Stopping in the beautiful valley surrounded by trees and a small creek is when you planted the first kiss upon my cheek.
Blushing no doubt with you staring deeply at me and my heart sure felt like it would jump out . Standing there on the hillside with you by my side and such a remarkable view I sure knew that this life was defiantly a new.
When suddenly the wind blew and you placed your arms around me holding me snug as I gave a gentle tug and quietly said, “Kiss me?
Not responding at first, as I seriously shook you just held me tightly.
Embracing tightly in your arms I could not help to question and instantly your big hands place softly against my face and staring deep into my eyes and close against my face you said, “Do not hesitate or have any doubt as this is real and true ”, as my frown had now turned around .
He added, “Loving you girl is so right and I am going to show you just how much all night .
At that moment I turned completely red and my heart was pounding, as he bent his head and came much closer against my face and quietly said, “May I kiss you all over since we are starting over” and that was the final straw.
I now felt weak actually and wanted him to just lay me down right there and then .
When he gave a big smile taking my hand and said, “Ready for that kiss now? As this was truly such a bliss and I replied, “Yes you may kiss me”.
Instantly I was wrapped firmly and secure in his arms as our moist lips connected softly as his tongue slid between my now parted lips and instantly danced with mine.
Our lips did not want to part but eventually did as we hurried back home where the passionate loving took place as our quivering bodies rocked the place.
Afterwards with such a bright glow I said, “Love me like this forever would be just right”, as he held me ever so tight and said, “Loving you is completely right”.
I had a huge smile as he said , “Ready for another kiss?, as I said, “Of course it’s only right”, and we both smiled.
Swiftly his moist tongue found mine, as we kissed extremely wet and deeply while embracing tightly in such a heartfelt moment as it was so nice and just right with him loving me.
Since he sure has stolen my heart away as I now hear him say, “I love you!
Laura, the words are passionate, but this looks to me to be more a poem than a story. Look the words over and place them in some semblence of poetic order and re-submit it as a poem.
Your new friend, Mark
The moment our eyes met there was a twinkle as a instant glow appeared upon my face. Then you gave such a bright smile saying, “Hello”, as my heart fluttered and I of course stuttered becoming totally mesmerized.
