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The Game Called Revolution
by Scott A Kinkade
Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       

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     A steampunk-esque story set at the beginning of the French Revolution. A trio of French knights finds themselves caught in the Bastille when it is stormed by a Parisian mob on July 14, 1789 (X Calendar). They must not only escape the siege, but also save King Louis XVI from an assasination plot.
Expect airships, weird technology, tweaked historical figures, and maybe a monster or two.

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Paris, July 14, 1789 (X Calendar), 9:50 a.m.
Eight ramparts eighty feet tall. A large moat. Steam cannons. The Bastille was a veritable fortress within the city of Paris. For years the prison had housed the most dangerous criminals in France, and was extremely brutal in doing so. No one who went in was ever seen again.
At least, that was what the public believed. The commoners held the idea that the Bastille was a hellish dungeon full of spies and political prisoners being punished for saying the wrong thing or simply being born the wrong person. Stories abound about people like the mysterious masked prisoner kept under guard a century before, along with the Marquis de Sade, and serve the give the prison its colorful reputation.
While there is a certain bit of truth to these stories, only those closely connected with the Bastille can separate fact from myth. Where does imagination end and truth begin?
One man who may know was on this day sitting in his cell within the stone walls of the Bastille. His name was Jacques du Chard. With his sandy-brown hair, simple shirt and grey leggings, the young man did not stand out at all.
 He lay on his bed, staring up at the ceiling and tried to keep himself occupied by counting the cracks. At that moment it was deathly quiet within the chamber occupied only by him and five other empty cells; contrary to popular belief, the prison was not infested with rats scurrying about and gnawing at the feet of prisoners. The few guards who kept watch over the room had about ten minutes ago left to go welcome some visitors.
The prisoner’s thoughts kept going back to that strange message that had appeared on the walls of the adjacent cell the other day. What did it mean? Rumor had it that cell belonged to the Marquis de Sade until just recently. None of the guards would tell him anything; they were keeping their mouths carefully shut.
Suddenly he heard the sound of a door opening. Jacques sat up, looked across the room and saw four people entering the room. He couldn’t get a good look at them until they arrived in the candle-lit center of the chamber. At the head of the group was the Marquis de Launay, the governor of the Bastille, whom the prisoner was familiar with. Jacques would have recognized his fancy brown suit embroidered in gold, along with his white hair that hung limply off either side of his head, anywhere.
The other three were wearing form-fitting suits of silver armor covered by helmets which concealed their faces. Jacques recognized them as members of the Ordre de la Tradition[1], a special group of knights who had been recognized by the king of France for outstanding service in the military, and who answered only to him. They were allowed to wear suits of armor made from irodium, a revolutionary metal developed by the English. Irodium was lightweight, easy to move in, and could withstand anything up to a shot from a steam cannon. In addition, two of them carried a broadsword in a scabbard at their side.
Jacques heard a female voice say, “It’s dark in here.” The voice came from the knight in the center who was somewhat shorter and more slender than the ones flanking her. She carried a rapier rather than the broadsword of her larger counterparts.
 She—along with her two subordinates—
 removed her helmet and Jacques could see her face. She didn’t look to be older than thirty years of age to him (she could even be his own age). Her auburn-colored hair fell to the middle of her back in a braided tail, and Jacques noted the purple eye patch over her right eye, along with the flowing purple skirt which opened around the middle of her Irodium leggings.
“Excuse me, Mademoiselle,” Jacques said. “Might you be the one they call ‘Jeanne le Juste’?”[2]
She looked at him with indifference for a moment, and then responded, “Yes. My name is Jeanne d’Fleur. I’m a knight with the Ordre de la Tradition.”
“Ah, I thought so. You are well known among the Third Estate.” The Estates General was composed of nobility, clergy, and commoners, respectively. “Ah, but you’re supposed to call them the National Assembly now, yes?” The commoners had recently broken away from the other two Estates—whom they had long been at odds with—and declared themselves the National Assembly (although a few members of the clergy and nobility joined them).
“Actually, last week they became the National Constituent Assembly,” Jeanne said. She then turned to de Launay. “Where is this message you spoke of?”
“It is in the cell to the left of the forger’s there.”
He escorted the three knights into the cell next to Jacques’. It was a spacious cell, easily twice as large as the others, and clearly meant for someone of importance. The bed in the cell was also a cut above those normally given to prisoners.
On the wall above the bed there was a series of words carved into the wall: “On July 14 the greatest joke will be told”.
            “And you believe this was written by Messier Donatien Alphonse François, the Marquis de Sade?” Jeanne asked upon examining it.
            “No one else has occupied this cell since the Marquis was transferred out ten days ago,” de Launay said.
            “Didn’t you question him about it before he was transferred?” Jeanne said.
            The governor shook his head. “It didn’t appear until yesterday.”
            “Well, then it couldn’t have been him,” said the gruff voice of the knight to the right of Jeanne. He was a good foot taller than her, with a neatly-trimmed beard and almond-colored skin. He obviously wasn’t entirely of European ancestry.
            “Pierre is right,” Jeanne said. “If the message didn’t appear until yesterday, what makes you think the Marquis is the one who wrote it?”
            “It wasn’t carved with a knife. The Marquis wasn’t allowed to have sharp objects in here. The message was written with a transparent, slow-acting acid he had smuggled in. Once it reacts with oxygen, the acid will begin dissolving whatever it has been applied to. The process is gradual and can take over a week depending on the concentration of the corrosive.”
            The knight to Jeanne’s left took off his helmet to get a better look at the message. He was slightly smaller than Pierre and less muscular, but he was still larger than Jeanne, a young man with long dark hair. “So the Marquis applies this to the wall—I’m guessing with a brush since we know he was allowed to write his perverted works in here—and is then transferred out, knowing the acid will soon burn his message into the wall.”
            “Yes, Victor,” Jeanne said. “The question is: why? Why would he go to the trouble of doing this?
            From over in the next cell, Jacques said, “Maybe it’s all a joke, no? I hear the Marquis de Sade is a real piece of work. We have all heard the stories. He kidnapped girls and did horrible things to them. They say he is the most twisted man in the world.”
            Jeanne ground her teeth slightly at being reminded of the Marquis’ crimes. “I am not his biggest supporter.” She turned her attention from Jacques back to the message on the wall. “However, I think we are missing something important.”
            Pierre cocked one eyebrow inquisitively. “Such as?”
            “The message seems to suggest that something will happen on July 14. That’s today.”
            “So it is,” Victor said.
            “You don’t suppose the Marquis is throwing you a surprise party?” Jacques retorted.
            Jeanne gave him a stern glance. “Be quiet, you scoundrel. This is serious.”
            Suddenly a guard burst into the room. “My Lord! It’s terrible! The people….!” He stopped to catch his breath.
            “What are you babbling about?” de Launay demanded.
            “There is a mob of people outside! At least a hundred of them, and more keep arriving. They’re yelling something about us keeping political prisoners here and abusing them. Their leader is a lawyer named Thuriot de la Rozère. He’s demanding we remove the steam cannons aimed at them and allow a civilian militia to take control of the Bastille.”
            The color rapidly drained from de Launay’s face as he took in the guard’s ominous words. “T-Those fools! The cannons aren’t aimed at anyone in particular. They’re here for the defense of the people! And there aren’t any political prisoners here; just the one forger.”
            “What are your orders, sir?”
            The Marquis de Launay paced the room while racking his mind to come up with an answer. Finally, he said, “Remove the cannons. I’ll go speak with their leader.” He turned to leave with the guard.
            Jeanne started after him. “I’ll go with you. My knights and I can help defend you.”
            “Are you really prepared to cut down the people you have sworn to protect?” Jacques said with a slight grin.
            Jeanne stopped. “Well, I….”
            “And so many of them!”
            “You stay here,” de Launay said, visibly scared. “If I meet them with armed soldiers, it will just anger them more. Besides, as skilled as you three are, I doubt even you could hold off all of them.”
            Jeanne reluctantly agreed. “Very well. We’ll stay here and continue to investigate the message.”
            The Marquis de Launay and the panicked guard left the chamber, leaving just Jeanne, Pierre, Victor and Jacques.
            Jeanne walked over to the wall next to the door they had entered. Jutting out from the wall was a rubber tube with a wide handle. She dialed a number on the panel below the tube and began speaking. “d’Fleur to Minuit Solaire[3]. What’s going on outside?” The Minuit Solaire was the airship of the Ordre de la Tradition. It was supposed to be anchored on a telegraph pole outside the prison. However, Jeanne’s communiqué was met with static. “I repeat: This is Commander Jeanne d’Fleur. Come in, Minuit Solaire. What is your status?”
            Again, there was only the crackle of static.
            “Sounds like we’re being jammed,” Victor said.
            Jeanne frowned. If the mob was indeed disrupting communications, that would imply the attack was even more organized than they thought. That would also mean the likelihood of eventual bloodshed just went up. A fight started on impulse wasn’t likely to have legs, but a premeditated attack was something else entirely. She didn’t need to say it, though; Pierre and Victor no doubt were thinking the same thing. She just hoped her crew on the airship was all right.
            “What more can we do here?” Pierre said.
            Jeanne went back into the cell and began to feel about the walls. “The Marquis de Sade loves to milk his jokes for all they’re worth. Stopping with a cryptic message isn’t his style. I bet he hid another piece of the puzzle for us to find.”
            Pierre and Victor helped her look around the cell. “Did he know the Bastille would be attacked today?” Victor said.
            “How could he? That would imply the attack was planned well in advance,” Pierre said.
            Suddenly Jeanne came upon a loose brick in the wall. She took it out, reached inside and pulled out a small glass vial filled with water. However, there were also countless tiny silver dots in the water.
            “Just as I thought,” she said. “A message pellet.”
            A message pellet is a little ball about the size of a kernel of corn. Using a magnifying glass, a person could write a message on it and then drop it into water. Once in the water it separates into a thousand copies of itself. Only by reassembling the ball can the message be read.
            “We have to get that back to the airship,” Pierre said.
            Jeanne sighed. “Until the governor can get the mob to disperse, we’re stuck here.”


[1] Order of Tradition
[2] Jeanne the Just
[3] Solar Midnight

 

 

 

 

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