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Putah (Pewter) Creek
by Jackie S Brooks
Thursday, September 25, 2003



       
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     This is a story written by my husband Jim, of his childhood memories of a hitch-hiking adventure with his friend Tuffy, to Putah Creek.

Jim’s Childhood Memories


 


A really wonderful memory just came to mind of my childhood. It was the summer of 1947. I lived at 440 South 7th Street, Apartment 1F, Richmond, California. I was about 11 years old at the time.


On this particular occasion, Richard, better known as "Dick" or "Tuffy," and I planned a trip to a place called Putah (Pewtah) Creek. I had been there once before with the Boy Scouts and I loved it. After several days of planning, we packed up our camping gear, fishing poles and what food we could carry that would see us through the next couple of days. We had saved up $5.00 between us and figured that would be enough for the next couple of weeks.


With our parents’ blessings, we took off, with my stepdad driving us to the edge of Richmond, saying our good-byes and then headed north. Tuffy and I started off on our big summer adventure. This was the beginning of a 90 mile trek, through a couple of cities and then the wilds of small country towns and small two lane country roads.


Tuffy and I walked and hitch-hiked the whole distance, with stops along the way to explore (we didn’t sightsee in the those days) the surrounding area and eat lunch. Yes, a couple of peanut butter and jelly sandwiches and strawberry flavored kool-aid from our glass insulated thermos bottles. As we were in the edge of the great wine growing country, we had to try some of those grapes to see if they were as good as people had claimed. The encapsulated juices were so sweet and warm, we savored each grape as though it was going to our last. Well, that’s a lie, we gorged ourselves up to our eyeballs and could have cared less about the finer side of wine tasting.


Among our other explorations, we came across a very old, very large house. It set quite a distance off the road, possibly 100 to 150 yards, but the important thing was that we could see no one lived in it, it was vacant even from that distance. It was yellow clapboard house, trimmed in milk chocolate brown. We walked up the drive, which went around to the back and led to what could only be called a ‘house sized’ garage and workshop underneath. There was no basement or cellar. Parked in the garage were four carriages in perfect condition. Two were similar to ‘hansom’ cabs, one a surrey with the fringe on top, the forerunner to todays people carrier, and one enclosed coach. They were all black, trimmed in red and gold. After looking over the workshop, we decided to go around to the front and see what we could see. Up the front steps we went, it must have been a ten-foot climb, to the front door. It was locked, we looked through the dirty windows and saw nothing but empty, bare rooms. It was two stories high plus the attic, but we never got higher than the front porch. It was very wide and went around two sides of the house.


After looking around the grounds a bit, we decided to move on to new horizons. Back to the road and out went our thumbs. After several short rides, with the usual chit-chat such as: "Where you boys from?" "Where you headed?" "Oh, yah, I been there fishin’ a coupla times." Eventually we arrive at our destination, Peutah Creek.


Peutah Creek is named after the Indian tribe who lived in that area of California. They were hunters and fishermen and quite a peaceful people. We found our spot that I had remembered, a nice sandy place at the waters edge, set up camp and went swimming. We did some scouting of the area and just ‘messed’ around for the rest of the day. Had more peanut butter sandwiches and kool-aid for dinner.


We had the whole world before us. For the next two weeks or so, we hiked up and down the river and throughout the valley. The morning after our arrival, we walked a couple of miles to the old town of Peutah Creek, where we found the filling station and got the 15 inch inner tube filled with air so that we could float down the river on it. We rode that inner tube every single day. I nearly forgot, while rafting down the river on my inner tube, I was shot in the back of my right shoulder by a small boy who was shooting at a floating milk carton. He must have missed it, BB shot glanced off the water and hit me. My back was to him so no damage was done. But it sure did sting. I said a few things to him I shouldn’t have, but we later made up and became buddies. Back to the town of Peutah Creek. The filling station was a single hand operated pump, with air compressor and a faucet and watering can. It had a small general store where we purchased our Pepsi-Colas, bread, milky-ways, milk and of course beans. The sidewalks were made of wood, the main street, in fact the only street, was a dirt road with three large oak trees down the center. Because of the oak trees, which overshadowed the street, it had a dark appearance to it. There had been other shops there at one time or other, but no more. It had boasted of a hotel too, but no more. There was a large livery stable and stage depot. Massive double doors, and above them was the old stage schedule. The schedule for 1850 read as follows:


To San Francisco, Oakland and Sacramento
Monday, Wednesday and Friday
Return Trip
Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday
No Coaches on Sunday


This was a typical Zane Grey western town. I half expected to Johnny McBrown, Hopalong Cassidy, Tom Mix or Lash Larou come walking down the street. The only problem with that lovely old town was, it was dying a slow death. I don’t recall seeing any women, just a few old timers.


Little did we know, that only three years down the road, that this very same creek would become part of a major reservoir, the Feather River Dam, and that that lovely old western town would be sitting some 200 feet below the surface. Little did we know that my stepdad would be working on that project.


We hitch-hiked back home and had loads of stories to tell the gang about our adventures.


I reminisce periodically about that time. And I thank God that He gave me such a wonderful opportunity to see and do things that children today will never, ever get a chance to do. Can you imagine two 11-12 year old boys today hitch-hiking without a care in the world? Living on $5.00 for two weeks, or its equivalent? There are all kinds of thoughts that can be brought to mind, which would never have been thought of in yesteryear. I often wonder what ever happened to that old yellow house. The owners never knew we had ever been there. It didn’t enter our minds to cause or do damage to someone else’s property.


Jim Brooks


September 25, 2003

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Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/27/2003
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful memory with us. It does go to show how much has changed in the world.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/26/2003
Dear Jim,

Listen to your lovely spouse. This is a great nostalgic piece - one of my favorite kinds. And, it brought back a lot of my grand old childhood memories, too. Lash Larue! I thought I was the only one in the world who even remembered that name. And Hopalong Cassidy! One of my childhood heroes!!
Great Job!
Ed
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/26/2003
nice write, jim; and jackie, thanks for sharing this with us! enjoyed very much! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn.
Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 9/25/2003
You see Jim, I told you it would make a good story and I am glad you got around to writing it down, now I can say "I TOLD YOU SO!!" without feeling guilty. Lots of love, Jackie <> <
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/25/2003
Very good story Jackie!!
Enjoyed reading it!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell 9/25/2003
What a great story! Brought back lots of memories of me and my brother Michael as we grew up together. Like Jerry though we would never have been allowed to enjoy such an adventure "unescorted" but still we'd sneak around and do things that my parents would have cringed over had they known! Too bad kids these days can't enjoy things like this anymore - too dangerous - then again, most of them would prefer to be stuck in front of a video game than exploring the great outdoors! GREAT write Jim - and Jackie, Jerry's right - - - you have some competition "in family" for writing a good story.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/25/2003
This was a very good story and caused me to think of my ramblings as a child in Arkansas. However, my ramblings were a lot different than yours, Jim. Although my liitle country town was innocent in those days also, there would be no way in the world that my folks would allow me to take such a trip. Still, I enjoyed the story and, hey! Jackie, you'd better watch out, hubby here has a nice way around the word play also. Competition? What say you?

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