Hubert grabbed as she teetered on the jetty. "Suicide is so selfish. Get away from there, silly bitch."
"Make me," hissed Adela.
He grabbed. She dodged. They struggled.
Splash.
She sobbed; "He died to save me!"
She thought; How else could I get him that close to the edge?
It is close to Halloween 2003 and this is a good story for that, did she plot murder by accident? Chiller! Jackie <> <
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield
3/26/2003
I agree! Nobody seems as interested in the stories. I wish they were also. But this story is super! I really like the way you said so much with so few words. Great job!
- J -
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
3/16/2003
I enjoyed your 50 word story even though short it had a picture I loved it !!! Longing to read more
Wow! This one is profound and a bit chilling! Great job!
By the way, not only is 'other poems' clicked on but even more seldom is 'stories'. Wish more people would read our stories.
Great job!
Debbie :)
Farctured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces, Part II satirizes popular children's stories into adult-oriented renditions. FFFF &FF, Part II is also available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble e-book formats.
Deputy Dave Jenkins sets out to find the murderer of the local high school principal, aided by a voice from the grave that is sometimes helpful and sometimes misleading.
"Murder isn't usually this funny."
Amazon reviewer
