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A Modern-Day Nightmare!
By Patricia Hilliard
Last edited: Friday, May 29, 2026
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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It was getting late into the night…but the project had to be completed soon. Eyes burned; shoulders ached. The computer screen flashed reds, yellows, greens, then black with white letters.  Then white with black letters. Clicking sounds of keys and buttons, a type of music that begs a response.  A siren voice calling through fiber optics and lunar transporters. A crescendo of energy flashing from the screen through the eyes into the brain. Feel the force within!  Feel it!

Alex leaned back in an ergo-dynamic chair, trying to stay human in a demanding world of machines and corporate aspirations.

The project had to be completed soon. A giga-byte box of data fluttered through A-I, spinning, merging, separating as if by magic into a reality that could be sent around the globe, but never held in the palms of your hands.

A loud noise erupted from the speaker. A flash of light then sudden darkness. Something had gone seriously wrong.

Alex did press the keys: Control, Alt, Delete. Save me oh God of Technology! What just happened?

The computer was unresponsive.

Turn it off and wait five minutes. Then turn it back on. Alex remembered this. It gave a sense of hope.

The computer returned to what a machine calls “life.”  A quick scan through the yellow file folders (an icon design from the distant past) allowed Alex to assess the situation.  What had happened? The project had to be completed soon.

The data was gone.

Alex leaned over the keyboard and cried. One may as well be dead.  

 


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 26, 2024
It sounds to me like Alex is your not-very-well-concealed name you call yourself. I could be wrong. Either way, your tale is also mine. And others. There's much to be said for pen and paper. If nothing else it helps me track my medical appointments.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 16, 2024
I can relate. While working on my Friday poem to place on my website, I discovered much of it was gone! I have all the files saved in multiple ways, so I attempted to restore them and found that that didn't work, either!

I called my Internet provider, and they gave me some options that I didn't like, so I attempted to restore the 5000 pages myself. Again, that didn't work. So, for 2nd time in 2 years I called them up again yesterday and had them restore my website to the backup they have, February 23, 2022. Hopefully I can upload the remaining poems from that date until now, myself. But $50 and $40 two years ago is a small price to pay to restore files going back to 1997 when I created the site.

Your story bodes well as a lesson for those who do not backup their work. Yesterday I purchased a number of protections and backups from my Internet provider that hopefully will prevent such a thing from happening again. I suspect it was a failure to pay when I corrected my credit card that expired and they ignored it.

Ron

Reviewed by Robert Drews
Reviewed on March 16, 2024
Nice piece, Patricia. This is something many of us can relate to when we rely on technology and are unable to fix when things blow up. It does bring a feeling of helplessness and panic, two emotions well exhibited in your essay. Modern technology is great when it works, frustrating and scary when it doesn't.

Cheers, and God bless.

Bob Drews
www.robert-drews.com

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on March 16, 2024
We've become so dependent on technology, and we're at its mercy.

Reviewed by Corrine Ardoin
Reviewed on March 15, 2024
This is great! It speaks to the looming concern over our lives being taken over by technology. It's a daily conversation, but your piece here takes it to the level of science fiction. A very real experience we can all relate to! "Trying to stay human in a demanding world of machines and corporate aspirations." That says it all, what we've created and have allowed. Great piece! Very well done.