Once there was a Pirate ship sailing the sea for adventure and gold. Then Mack the shark, who was a giant shark, came up under the boat. Mack chomped a hole in the middle of the ship, and slowly the boat sank. All the wood came off the Pirate ship and all the sails fell and broke into little pieces.

Then a rescue helicopter with three rotors on top came to help the pirates. Only one was saved because the rest were in the stomach of Mack.  

Then a huge whale ate the shark and the rescue guys saved the other Pirates from inside Mack. Then after the Pirates were all better they got together and bought a new pirate ship at the pirate store. 

 The end. by Alex Ryan Potter age 5