Not bad Lisa. In fact, pretty good. Your poem left me wanting more but I enjoyed what I had. That's good news for any poet. Your poem reminds me a bit of one of one of my own poems (Comfort) in terms of style. Comfort is posted here in the Authors Den. I notice you only have one poem posted. You have a gift for poetry. May I suggest that you use it more.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
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The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
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