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Pits of Hell
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse   
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A Poetry Recite I Did For The Gothic Literature Room at CTI.

Happy Halloween :)

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Pits of Hell

 

Thunder of depths persuade…as darkness creeps…

Walking in shadows unfledged by howls,

casting beneath the feast of the hunters moon…

Famished inside emotions…starved within the wastrels of devastation

Hearts peril is a ravage under the sinister soul of painted trespass…

be warned of drudgeries claimed by demise…

beware of the iron wroth burning fires ash…no doors to open…

no doors to now close…the reality of banishments live…

gates to these pits of hell…opening…breath my darling…breath

(Written: July 17, 2008 2:00 p/m)

In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love

Embraced ~ Embrassé

poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique

Copyright© 2008 Victoria L. McColley

 


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Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
OMG, I always thought it would be heaven to be privately closeted with dear Victoria in some wasteland unknown to the rest of the world. Now, I have only one thing to say: Women aren't the only ones who can change their minds. After reading this posting, the only thing that saved my soul was the delightful, almost childlike laughter of our Romantic Poetess in closure.

"Breath my darling...breath"

Are you kidding me?

What a change of pace! Loved it.

Richard

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
Awesome captivating Gothic verse
Your chosen words captured beautiful imagery
in My mind awesome write
Not to scary for me!
I Love dark poetry
HAPPY HALLOWEEN..Morning Star

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
Ooheeeee...this was too dark for me....I'm a tad on the soft side...but the writing is great and it is a good scary piece... keep it up girl!
By the way...got your note, and glad you have been busy and doing things you love... great about the sugar pumpkins too... later, lindalaw

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
You had me cowering under the covers ... Talk about a treat!!! Terrifyingly wonderful ... Keep on playing with the dark ....

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
The screams...the screams...where are my screams of fear? no dark and humid dungeon is right without them, and the smell of drying blood...

Georg


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
Gripping and dark, like walking into a dungeon, can almost smell the brimstone and feel the chill along one's spine. Very nicely done.
hugs
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