Gosh, this is sooo romantic and yes, yes, yes, very seductive! You do have a gift Vickie, that of being a most romantic writer and your voice hold such warmth and affection. You are aptly called the Romantic Poetess, no doubt about it. Blessings to you.
Pronouncement of an emotion so great...I am going through my own healing process from having said "and I love you"...and so I appreciate what it is you have said here, in so that I may find forgiveness in what was a long-term relationship...to love deeply is a great accomplishment and few ever find a love of such a depth...it means freeing oneself to allow the other to be who she wants...your voice delivers this poetry in passionate tone, Victoria...a deeply connecting piece that I can relate to at this point in my mid-life.
Spellbinding lyrics that stir my emotions and excite my imagination.
Your seductive voice delivered in your closing lines are passionate and totally believable, "...and I love you...I deeply love you..."
Oh my God, a lovely woman's passion expressed so devotedly is the voice men dream about. Surely, you must be speaking to me! (Every man hearing your recitation must be thinking the same thing.)
Ho-hum, another masterpiece by Romantic Poetess--Victoria McColley.
What could possibly be next?
Richard
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
wow-Lucky guy whoever this is dedicated to-Very Romantic and Passionate--So Lovely to hear your voice reading the words--if we had to rate out of a possible 5 Stars poetry here I would say you got all 5 with this poem!
Reviewed by David cox (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
WOW! WOW! HOT! HOT! HOT! TIME TO HIT THE COLD SHOWER VICKIE.THAT CERTAINLY GOT THE BLOOD BOILING, I AM DEFINATLY SAVING UP FOR A TICKET TO INDIANNA,
YOU SHOULD DO MORE OF THIS YOUR VOICE SO SUITS THIS VERY PASSIONATE AND EROTIC PIECE, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS WITH US.
We should have meet in one of the Versailles dancing evenings, you would have wear lavender silk, I the Queen's Uniform, your mischievous eyes would have promised more than a dance...but also whispers of poetry.
As always your poetry becomes the music of passion and romance. This is lovely and almost classically perfect...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Victoria, I feel like I've been seduced.........I know I WILL NEVER
write poetry like you. You have such a gift and I'm glad you are using it to the hilt!
Always,
Deborah
Enchanted Desire, published by The Wild Rose Press, tells the story of a beautiful young college student, Shanna, who is looking for a fresh start and a way out of a bad relationship. She meets and falls in love with Kenny, a sexy 6 foot 8 Native Ame
He needs a wife. She needs a reason to trust him. He fell for her at first sight. She, not so much.
If you’re into engaging romantic stories with heart and humor, together with complex family dynamics, you’ll love His Practically Perfect Pla
Love,
Sheri
Love,
Sage
Sheila
Your seductive voice delivered in your closing lines are passionate and totally believable, "...and I love you...I deeply love you..."
Oh my God, a lovely woman's passion expressed so devotedly is the voice men dream about. Surely, you must be speaking to me! (Every man hearing your recitation must be thinking the same thing.)
Ho-hum, another masterpiece by Romantic Poetess--Victoria McColley.
What could possibly be next?
Richard
YOU SHOULD DO MORE OF THIS YOUR VOICE SO SUITS THIS VERY PASSIONATE AND EROTIC PIECE, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS WITH US.
Regis
Georg
hugs
fee
write poetry like you. You have such a gift and I'm glad you are using it to the hilt!
Always,
Deborah