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Blogs by Eileen Clemens Granfors
Adverbs are Out 12/7/2007 7:37:00 AM
"No adverbs," the teacher said adversarily. No one wants writing that sounds like a Tom Swifty: "Breathe deeply," the doctor said patiently.
Writing teachers and writing books say, "Drop all adverbs!"
I do proofread for unnecessary adverbs. I can find a better way to express what the adverb is saying:
She spoke sternly.
She frowned, her voice stern with fear.
Rule #1 in my high school composition classes was "just say NO to SO." Sentences reflect more energy without that tired, old so.
Rule #2 , from Payne's The Lively Art of Writing : Avoid sentences that begin with Here or There . These two expletives cause an inversion of the subject and the sentence falls flat. When you see either of them, try another way:
There was a big pond at the north of the park.
A big pond lured us to the north of the park .
Eileen
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