They tell writers, "Write what you know." But often we have to go beyond personal experience, especially when writing mystery, suspense, or thriller novels. After all, how many people have extensive first-hand experience with villains and victims? Even police officers don't know what it's like to be a murderer, even if they've met some.
While I have yet to meet a murderer, so far as I know, I did
find myself involved in a murder case. Two friends and I were exploring the
mountains, when the guys
smelled something horrible. A glance in the right direction showed them a dead
body hidden just out of sight of the path.
The next hour passed in a surreal blur. None of us had a
phone on us. We got back to our phones and then had to find a place with
reception. We called 911, waited for the police, and led them to the body.
Later that night we were interviewed by detectives. By the following day, they
had identified the body as a woman who had been missing. Seeing her picture on
TV and learning about her family made the situation real in a new way. We wanted
justice for someone we’d never met. Fortunately, they already had a suspect,
but it took nearly a year to resolve the case.
As a writer, I knew I was getting rare first-hand experience
into something powerful. I took pages of notes during that first week, even
though I didn’t know how or when I might use them. I was fortunate to be with
two men who talked openly about their experiences: the nightmares, the guilt
over violence against women, the anxiety that came from now wondering what you
might see in the bushes.
Three things struck me most strongly. First, we all felt
deeply invested in the case, even though we’d never met the woman in life and
didn’t know anyone else involved. We followed the news stories, and when the
murderer was finally sentenced … well, I wouldn’t say we celebrated; more like
we relaxed, although we resented his sentence, which seemed too mild for the crime.
Second, it affected every aspect of our lives for weeks.
Even though the likelihood of finding another body, or even witnessing a
different crime, was extremely slim, we were on high alert at all times. It was
a struggle to put it behind us while still honoring the memory of the victim
and holding on to what we had learned.
And finally, we heard from someone in law enforcement that
often people don’t report crime scenes like these. How could someone walk away
from that? I started thinking about all the reasons someone might want to cover
up their discovery, even if they had nothing to do with the crime. And that
inspired What We Found.
Several years passed before I felt distant enough from the
experience to fictionalize it, but I still had all those notes and memories to
draw on. Some elements of What We Found,
mainly the emotional ones, are taken directly from that experience. Most
character and plot elements are completely fictional.
This isn’t an experience I would wish on anyone, but we’re
glad we helped bring a crime to light and a murderer to justice. And it led to
what I consider my most powerful and personal novel to date. After all, one
benefit to being a writer is that the worst experiences are still valuable as
research.
That’s the truth behind What
We Found.