"Let's Get It On"
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I can relate: this poem is power packed; short and sweet, leaving the ending to the reader. Great job.

3/21/2010 1:25:45 AM [ Report Abuse ]

Thanks, Felix. Thankfully, it's not about me. :)

3/19/2010 8:55:48 PM [ Report Abuse ]

Hi Susan,
I read this a few times, not sure if it is about you, someone you know or just inspired. It is sad seeing babies having babies. Some will argue that in generations past it was quite common and perhaps it was but in this day and age it leaves these poor kids both the mothers and the babies an uphill battle often ending in tragedy.
Strong emotional write Susan.
fee

3/19/2010 3:34:20 PM [ Report Abuse ]