I think I have a solution. As I read through the narrative, I felt the characterization of the main character was off. I'm correcting that now and this is giving me a much better perspective of the story as a whole. Said simply, I think it works!
As my fellow novelists know, this is a "one word at a time" process. As I've done with all my novels, I know how the story is going to end. This gives me a target to work towards.
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Celts and Kings: The story behind the mystifying disappearance of the Celtic Earls in 1607. The story of a lost love and Celtic Spirituality.
The story of a forbidden love going back 400 years.
The story steeped in Irish history, Ce
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