I subscribe to the newsgroup and had posted a haiku I''m referring to as freedom flight and this is the response I got from the editor of the magazine who is also the moderator of this news group associated with the online magazine:
Re: haiku Very fine indeed. I really like the "punch line" in the
last verse. The ambiguity of the preposition "for" makes is strong.
Good work.
P.S. Send me this haiku for publication in the Winter 2005 issue of
Canadian Zen Haiku canadien, to:
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Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.