A year ago I was battling some health issues and working on a new novel...I am back working on the novel and can see that an author's health effects their work...I had a kidney stone the size of a large marble and was feeling poorly while going about my daily routine...working at the diner raising a seventh grader and trying to complete my third novel...on top of that I self diagnosed a condition I am now pretty much free of...TOO MUCH CANDIDA or yeast in my system (loaves of bread were invading my gut...yuck...well, a bit overexaggerated but then that's me)... further causing fatigue, joint pain, at times nervousness, and facial eruptions and a host of other undesireable conditions...lovely...any how...I am sugar-free, dairy-free, gluten-free and feeling the best I have in my entire life...the kidney stone got blasted away and life is calmer and yet more energetic on a daily basis for me...SO...going back into my third novel I am now able to smooth out the choppiness (thanks MOM for pointing that out...it really helped me)...and tighten it up...I am excited about it and eager to finish up the final edit and get it OUT THERE...still working on the screenplay fro "BJOYFL" and will write the screenplay for "Puddles" in the near future...life is better, now...I am a believer that we are what we eat...and I am proud to not be LOAFING around anymore...(cheap yeast-free reference)...love ya