I started this one 4 years ago. Got hung up on one word. Found it last night.
I called you witch priestess enchantress Told you- you were my love darling dream woman With wonderment I kissed you stroked you entered you But there is no definition endearment action That matches what you were to me
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Welcome to Hell on Earth, boys.
Andersonville POW camp...
Russell's battle-worn body looked defeated. He was a Union soldier; she was a Confederate nurse. But when Rosa looked into his eyes, she saw pure determination. He looked fo
Love this! For many reasons, but especially because
it conveys so much!
One word: Were. Everything is in past tense--so the love is over, I'd say. Excellent write with few succinct words--perfectly done!
Glad you found the word--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
I reread you because you deliver so much with brevity... and your written architecture suggests layers. I'm never disappointed. katy xox
Pass tense...but very fine write!!
Love Tinka
There is no word to define it!;-) Wonderful poem!
Alrisha