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Name It
by Roger A. Ochs → (All Poetry by Roger A. Ochs)
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I started this one 4 years ago. Got hung up on one word. Found it last night.

I called you
                  witch
                  priestess
                  enchantress
Told you- you were my
                   love
                   darling
                   dream woman
With wonderment I
                    kissed you
                    stroked you
                    entered you
But there is no
                     definition
                     endearment
                     action
That matches what you
                      were
                      to
                      me


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 Reviews of "Name It"
Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on August 10, 2005
Indeed. Some experiences refuse to give themselves to words.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Roger,

Love this! For many reasons, but especially because
it conveys so much!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Sometimes one word can indeed make all the difference. Thank you for sharing this offering, Roger. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Please see my blog for an explaination.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
enchanting, no doubt ...

Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Roger,

One word: Were. Everything is in past tense--so the love is over, I'd say. Excellent write with few succinct words--perfectly done!

Glad you found the word--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
...but you aren't going to tell us which word it is, are you?

I reread you because you deliver so much with brevity... and your written architecture suggests layers. I'm never disappointed. katy xox

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
wonderful poem and yes it does hinge on that one word...were

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
was the word my any chance "WERE"???

Pass tense...but very fine write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
I agree with Eileen, Glad you did find the word so that we could be blessed with this wonderful write full of love.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
When you can't find the word that's true love.
There is no word to define it!;-) Wonderful poem!

Alrisha

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
You romantic devil...ed


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