It is a long way from here to there
from then till now is longer still, but
that is the time and
that is the distance
we have traveled, together.
Together we have traveled:
traveled and grown,
sought and fought
misunderstood and discovered.
In the seeking and the fighting
we have grown.
We have traveled through
misunderstanding to discovery;
through discovery, not to soft love, but
love
strong enough for the journey.
This is a wonderful - realistic poem because you have written something that many readers will readily identify with. Well done!!
~Rose~
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
Two works in progress, two life in progress. Or one life with two possible directions. Which one is it John. A really enjoyabe poem.
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I see only the one, but I am not quite up to par with regards the smarts department, but I find that one to be quite an interesting write, John, as usual befitting a great philosopher as yourself...Peace thru Words, Ed & Rufuz
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well done!
~Rose~
Coming from you heart, I know how you feel. Bill Murray