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A Dream Awakens
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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A Dream Awakens
By Susan de Vegter

I tucked my pillows all around
So not to feel alone
Into the quiet dead of night
I ached for you into my bones
As yearnings pierced each silent wail
Into a void I groped and fell
Until the lonely twisted aching
Slipped me to sleep
To a dream awakening.

Copyright
2004

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 Reviews of "A Dream Awakens"
Reviewed by Knight Flo (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2007
I absolutely think this is beautiful!

Reviewed by Everett DeValle
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Beautifully written, so tender. Loved this. ~Ev

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
Susan,
This is excellent....

~PEACE

LP

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Susan, unfortunately I’ve been inundated lately, but I have continued to read your stunning creations. I enjoy reading your work and learning from your golden gifted quill. You possess extraordinary poetic talent, style and grace, and your stimulating work will continue to enlighten and delight the masses long after we depart from this world. I know I will carry the wonderful memories of your well-penned compositions. You have continued to elevate the level of knowledge in all who are fortunate enough to visit your dramatic Den. For those of us who are willing to consider ourselves to be a human being, author or poet, we naturally draw off each other’s creative influences. I have enjoyed reading another timeless treasure and visit. Thank you for sharing your extraordinary work, my poet friend. Take care and be well. Good luck. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
well what could be said...but that i know this too! and that you captured it so well in so few,very good!!!!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Succinct and powerful, Susan, and I love the unusual sense of falling into a much-desired dream - not through a feeling of the "warm fuzzies", but instead through the icy blast of loneliness. Artwork PERFECTLY matches your beautiful poem as if made for it! Praying for you at this empty time. "Pain makes the pen fly", so says dear Floria Kelderhouse. Hope you don't mind, but I have quoted your Indian proverb from your Biog page at the head of my today's poem - with grateful thanks, of course! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
Beautiful capture of so close...yet so far. May that soon change... Wonderfully said.

Allen

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
You do that toi? I do it to keep from getting Acid Reflux.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Very nice. You captured the feeling perfectly.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
I snug up to my duvet....

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Ah, yes, my dear, it is that dream awakening that makes the difference. Loved this little bitty tiny poem. LOL

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
An outstanding piece
Well Penned
enjoyed

William

Reviewed on September 17, 2004
(((susan)))

BREATHTAKING! stunning emotion and imagery--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
nicely done

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Stunning Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Susan...The Ache of Love is unbearable...
Beautiful expression of yearning..
Peter

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
love those last three lines... short length and word choice give it real impact I think.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Deeply felt, vibrant with yearning.
A beautiful gem of a poem Susan!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Vivid and intense, so well penned Susan.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Dear Susan

A sad and longing write, you have expressed your tremendous yearning so clearly.

Warm hugs
Elga


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