Cry For Me (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

very very sad but bautifully written with a flow that takes the reader deep within themselves to remember situations in their life that brought tears flowing down,,,blessings..Cecil

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

very strong emotions here - thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

I hope you are not suffering--just writing a heart wrenching poem. If you are, no one can cry for you. Each of us must cry alone in our own way. If you touch us we will cry. But, we may not cry for your pain, but rather, the memory of our own.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

So painful, so vulnerable, so open, SO HONEST!! The greatest and bravest thing we can do sometimes is to admit to our own needs and this is a mark of a mature and truly alive human-being who is not afraid to know and to be known by others. You give us the greatest privilege of saying "Let us be there for you", which, in turn, enriches our own souls with the understanding that we are "wanted". I pray that, over and above our own human attempts to bring solace and comfort, you would find the infinite and everlasting arms opened wide for you, to cover your pain and grief and to bear it with you and for you. Bless you, Susan. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Okay I am good at it...lol!!

But will you join me for the laugh after the cry?????

I bet you would say YES!!

Painful write Susan!!

Love Tinka :(

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Susan, this is a splendid write from the emotions of broken heart. Your expressions in verse are spectacular. Hope heals, for through hope...there is healing. Prayers for you this night

Allen

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Susan....Lay all your tears and fears on the one who really cares for you..The Good Lord....and I will pray for you that you are given grace and strength to overcome this passing torment from hell...
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Susan, I had to stop reading and begin again. I felt this
deep in my soul...I'm crying for you and hope soon I'll be smiling with you! Excellent soulful poem...

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Everyone has been there, its part of life, part of growing, part of being connected to others.......it sucks......no doubt about it.....
but you have expressed the emotion with elegance and clarity.....I hope things improve and mend for you Susan......be well......pax A

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Susan, this is well-written and stirs the heart. i remember this feeling well and when you're in it it feels like an endless torture. let me know if i can help in any way. Dawn

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

I cried when I read this, I hope you aren't there, numb with grief, but when you are, in time you will feel and cry again and though it seems you never will, one day you will be able to smile and laugh again. Exquisite write, Susan.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

heart rending write susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

(((susan)))

deep sadness and pain resonates through each line--i've been feeling like this lately...so let me cry for you instead of me :(

powerfully emotive write--if you need to talk, message board me (PRIVATE) you can bend my ear anytime, i'll answer when i can, but i will answer

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(