Honey On the Walls (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

A pretty sticky situation. First thought. This is going to be erotic. Second thought. Soothing poem. Final thought.

Ron

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

Nature's beauty can leave us speechless, lost for words, persuading us to only feel without attempting to apply linear logic or dimensional perception. This poem and image however come close to doing that anyway.

RAge

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

Beautifully done Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Hariharan Balakrishnan

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

Very good imagery and poetic sense. If only you give free flow to your thoughts and forget the rhyme/structure aspect, this could turn out to be burnished gold, Susan. Please re-visit the poem. You can do it. It is in you- an excellent poet.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

This poem rocks Susan the color, sights sounds and smells permeate the verses like spice on cooking changes the taste of somthing bland.well done piece of word painting my dear friend.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

For me, this is when you are at your best! I can linger over the beauty of this poem with joy! keeper! Thank you, Susan!

eT

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

~~Susan~~very beautiful poem~~i will carry and read at sunsets~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

beautiful imagery such a feeling of perfect calm in this write well done

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

beautifully tranquil
:)
and I love the title......sometimes, a title and a poem won't match........
but........
this is perfection :)
pax A

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Susan
You invoke visions and feelings of comfort and ease in this evocative and compelling piece...
There is no greater feeling in the world, than being at peace with yourself...
As my Grandad used to admonish me " You must first love yourself, before you can give love to anyone else "
Peter

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Susan,

Stunningly imaged, beautifully written and experienced; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Beautifully put. Perfection here with this one, as I could reflect your words to mirror the little bayou town I live in. (Well, it isn't as little as it used to be after Kartina.) I can look out the window where I sit and see the stout southern breeze whipping through the oak and willows and the bayou rippling a little dance atop the water to go with the southern gusts. Loved your poem, got me going!