Dedicated to all who believe love can come along one day.
In the crystal pure drone of passion
When the walls are kaliedescope
When the hours fore dawn are taken apart
When life is alive with hope
The spoken words of passion expel
From lungs burning with fire
When magentas' glow bounce off the walls
When appendages weave and are mired
These are the mornings I wish to return
To securities of a love
The one with the bounce of pulsing rain
When dawn comes in with a shove
Met with the push of love giving back
The moments of mornings fire
The ones of hearts breaking the walls
Greeting daybreak with desires.
Susan I do not know where the bounds of your passion end and erotica begin but I do know just sittin back and enjoying your wonderful writes arroses me.
Pushing more than the envelope here, Susan, your passion writes are exotic in the extreme and are so sweetly mind-expanding with their unique expressions and subtle sensualities. You are very, very good!! :)) Just love the lines: "...I wish to return To securities of a love The one with the bounce of pulsing rain When dawn comes in with a shove Met with the push of love giving back" - very visual!! Wonderful work... keep 'em comin! LOL Kate xx
Susan
A very passionate and romantic write that underlines your credentials as a sublime artist of magnetic expression...
Your work is both exquisite and intense...
Love and Light
Peter
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
You had a bit of trouble getting posted, but thank goodness you managed to get this little gem on. Susan, you pushed and shoved, bobbed and weaved and found the scorching fire to write this wonderful poem. Besides all the heat, there are some fine life's lessons withing the structure here. Good. Good.
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A very passionate and romantic write that underlines your credentials as a sublime artist of magnetic expression...
Your work is both exquisite and intense...
Love and Light
Peter