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Tell Me Why?
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Tell me ... would you hold her close Embrace her chin with your first caress
Run your fingers to her throat
Then tell me would you pull her
Closer to your chest
Would you caress her bare shoulders
Put all passions to this test
Then tell me would you waltz her
Carefully to your bed
Lay your hand to her small back
Palm her lovely silken head
Then take her eyes in carefully
Engulf her winsome moves
Make a bed for all night loving
Cut a fevered mattress groove
Then tell when can I be
Just where she is now
And why am I here waiting
With my hand above me brow
Oh love of shadows midnight
Oh man of no real name
Tell me why I still wait
When I'm tired but all the same
Sweet man of night dream's mystery
Why make me wait the more
Come handsome man of midnight's dream,
These passions beg for more
Whomever you are ...Destiny
Whenever my smile comes
The real in dreams of testimony
Will make me come undone.

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 Reviews of "Tell Me Why?"
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
Susan,

Sublime, perfect longing in this excellent write...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
Masterfully done. Your dreams are but a prayer from reality. Art

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
You nailed this one to the groove!!

Well done Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
Your romantic heart is one that covers every corner of the soul:
The wonderment, the passion, the submission of self AND you also bring the balance to those endearments with the realisations of the forlorn and unrequited longings held so deeply for the lover of our souls dreams.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
"Cut a fevered mattress groove" Oh, boy! Without a doubt the best poem of desire projected to a nameless lover I have ever read. Tremendous.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
Susan
A fever pitched and passionate offering....
Cometh the hour, cometh the man !
Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
Sweet the woman's desires expressed by a woman who has the passion of a lioness. Well done dear friend.

Hugs.
Fee

Reviewed on May 8, 2006
excellent write, susan; very well done! take a bow; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
~~Susan~~this poem echos screams of passion and sadness~~my tears~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
this is just so good, i'm speechless


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