My woman lies there in nude finery,
Crimson lips and body for me to see;
Sharpening her claws, she is so sublime,
Ah, but our illicit love is a crime.
She muses his form then licks her lips
She traces his profile with lust
Then stretches her cat that is going to pounce
From passions in lust that he trusts
Okay you cutting in on me Jerry LOL, Just kidding. Wonderful collaboration by two of my favorite authors. Great work or should I say pleasure.
Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Well! I like it, Susan, but I have to say if not for your four lines which complimented mine, it would not have had the "oomph" that it has. I guess that is why they call it collaborating, huh? Enjoyed it.
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
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Ron
Love tinka
Well done ejoyed much
Love & Peace
William
A marvellous collaboration by two of my favorite writers in the Den...
They say heaven comes in twos !!
Peter
Good quickie, here.
-Bill
Felix