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Shangri 'La
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Inside every person is a place that heaven tends
A garden of all passions where most of man pretends
This Shangri' La of pleasures and roasted love on high
Oasis of all tenderness made richer for the sighs
Where loving is unselfish and the flesh is in control
Where the heart of Souls,... the Spirit ... contructs it's own atoll
Each dance of flesh is gentle...each moment flows with ease
When humming starts to moan just as the fissures seethe
Each bud upon the nipples ...fuschias moist and bold
As harder he approaches til spirits grab and hold
He enters every crevice ... revels to every push
Then pulls upon his power as pulses start to rush
Then breaths are taken faster... each heave a boosted thrust
Euphorically this plain unfolds as dams begin to burst
He opens up a river as love's fluids begin
Another push it flows the more... three times it floods on in
There is no feeling like it as awesome as it comes
When love is finally set free and passions head on home

Each move with him... a symphony...each tender touch is blessed
Spiritually enigmatic...pleasure bound and yet
Our minds desire to capture each second that love showers
As hearts rebound in rapture...so private and all ours
Most people never know it...their love is merely lust
With him it is Eutopia when passions give it up
Shangri' La or Heaven...whatever springs from love
It comes to few in this world where this love floats above
When selfishness enables but one to occupy
This climactic time of sharing then leaves most love deprived
My love ...he is my spirit and he has but one sure form
His passion brought me Heaven when his Shangri' La came home.

©copyright 2006
Susan K.de Vegter

   

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 Reviews of "Shangri 'La"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Very fine offering Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Yay! team!! one more score, for love, not lust, evermore.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Fine prose, smooth flowing read, Shangri La la lalaaaaa la. I gone la la...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Susan this is outstanding and brings us all into Shangri la! Passionate enchanting poetry!Thank you!

eT

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
a beautiful and passionate sojourn into paradise ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Rich as fine silk, this passionate write as all of your writes tend to be is interwoven with sensuality and desire. Well done again my dear Susan.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Susan
Reminded me of Acker Bilk's " Stranger on the Shore "....
Masterly write from your golden quill
Love and Peace
Peter

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
I think you are very fortunate. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
I remember the old movie and the haunting words of A Stranger in Paradise. You have updated it with this voluptous outpouring of lustful, passionate soul.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Loved every damn word of this. You are hittin; on all eight and when you brought out the lust/love factor, you rived up the guantlet of what's real and what's not. You're a keeper.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
This is awsome, a masterful erotic, romantic, loving write
my highest compliment to you

Wish i wrote it
pax A


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