Senses (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 14, 2006

Heck of a wake up Susan...and you spirit is not only "alive and free", it's soaring. I love the way you've identified all those sensations you can't always put a name on, all those feelings that are bursting from you and may only be touched and never spoken, seen but never heard. I wish I had your way with words...I know we think alike.
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Beautiful ending!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Very well done Susan!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

hold that thought, susan! nicely expressed.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

this is lovely, both in composition...which flows in a gentle, lyrical fashion...but also in the emotional messages it has layered within. Splendid work.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Intense write that echoes the bonds that travel the cosmos and back to earth a thousand times a minute. The muse you call your own and shares your soul rushes in with the passion of a thousand hot summer nights with a southern breeze stirring the curtains. Do I know what I am saying probably not but this write sure made me want to express my ideas that mesh with yours at times.

Fee

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

You write with such elegance and earthiness of the cosmic connection.......something like this must be FELT.....to be expressed......and you are the poet to do it.........and express it so well

thanks for the smile Sue!
anita :)

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Timespace quantizizes everything - objects, thoughts and separates them, puts physical distance between fragments of life. It is difficult enough to understand this scattered environment, but some have brief clues of reality without spacetime from which feelings emerge that compell to be fitted into experience related to spacetime. You did that in this eloquent expression which is the prerogative of advanced spirits.

RAge

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Thanks for stimulating my senses.

Ron

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

A stunning, beautiful write!
B&R

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Beautiful...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Sensational lines most truly! You put living flesh on the concept of erotic empathy and bring it beautifully to life.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Uplifting...A great tonic for the day...

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Wonderful passionate write Susan.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

You ooze sensuality when the mood comes over you as it has in this write.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

love it!!

Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

I know this feeling well sis, and you describe it beautifully! Sensuous deeply felt poem!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

When the senses are fine-tuned into another's psyche as you write about here, there is definately a "catch" in the throat, or a feeling if you will, concerning that special one. I have most assuredly had that feeling, and it is a GOOD feeling to have.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Susan

We are never alone...
When you are one with the Cosmos, then you are surrounded by divine love...
Beautiful write, and I love the psychadelic graphic..

Love
Peter