the light that shines from within you
pales to the sunshine itself
the wisdom of logic surrounds you
theres nothing here to reject
your walk is light as a feather
and you barely make a sound
you seduce the passions of weather
your magic, an echo...resounds
you beat with the cadence of two steps
for me and again...then there's yours
moisture from you is as fluid as wet
you veil every bead from my pores
your smile is as dear as a treasure
your heartbeat as near as my own
your image a drape with the weather
your love in my heart is full blown
Such a heartfelt expression of love, a joy to read, love is all that matters if you believe as I do. If we can no longer love then we are truly lost. fearless, and to the point. Pierre.
Communication with words is often frustratingly inaccurate, error sensitive or just plain treacherous. And then at times we come across eloquent expressions like this poem you wrote from your heart and we are amazed at what some of us can do with words, stunned by the depth of feelings the words reflect.
My magic ran off with a freak show long ago. Now I read of wonders I can't write by the flickering candle of my soul. Horizons lost over the edge. Imagination fried in facts.
Love translates well from your pen, Susan. It is evidenced here easily and from the heart with real passion that many others fail to achieve. Beautiful.
Amor
Must be love in the deepest sense of the word, Susan...but it is to be loved in return that enables the beauty in you pen...and deserving is the recipient who ignites them.
Hugs,
Taylor~
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage as she is…whether they wa
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God Bless
Michelle!
Dear poet and fellow explorer of the realms unknown ... you have a volcano in you that needs to explode!
Pity the surrounding neighborhood when it does!
Your friend and fellow explorer ...
Richard
Great rite.
Ron
Amor
Hugs,
Taylor~
all kinds of love in this life
we pick and choose........
pax A
love your melody.....your words have graceful balance.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
Someone very special has stole your heart away..
Peter