It's a Whisper (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 23, 2006

Loud does not become love.

Ron

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

Exactly how I feel at that moment..... Beautiful. Pierre.

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

Truly it replaces the tears with a smile; you are so right--it can't be taken away once whispered to the waiting one. This is a wonderfully romantic piece. Ah, true love!
Connie

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Ohhhh I think you've managed to melt a few well chosen hearts with this one, my friend...and there is such magic in your words with the way a whisper sounds and feels to the ear...hmmm ears are the door to stimutation of the mind...listen to the silence in between the whispers...listen to the breathing....and feel the romance. UMMMMMMM!
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Whispering........this is so beautifully romantic!!

Shhhhhhhhh....not so loud!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

This is truly a romance write at it's best Susan, you took your heart covered it with love and kisses and offered to the one you love. Beautiful.

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

How beautiful is your soul dear Susan! I swear that you are beginning to flow in those streams of thought that many dream to be in.

"embrace the chiseled avenues from smiles to every tear" Indeed!

What heart wouldn't melt under the soft shower of these lovely thoughts?

Richard the Intrepid

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

A soft, flowing, eloquent poem of love Susan. Well done...enjoyed the read :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

What beautiful serenity in verse and image; tender romance blooms in your words! Thank you, this is gorgeous, Susan. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

the whisper with I love you
is given from the heart

It surely is, Susan.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

this flows beautifully, Susan, and I found myself reading it in a whisper!

Susan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Beautiful whispered poetry, Susan, that is heard at full volume when it is spoken and heard by the heart as well as the mind. Although gentle, there is a frisson of excitement and energy in this... like the increase in beating of the excited heart... stirring stuff!! Even if silent, the words I Love You can be felt and sensed through each of all the other five senses put together. Love this, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Jerry said it all

and I must add
I love your poetry sue!
pax A

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Susan

You are the master poetess at romance...

Peter

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Oh Susan...this just takes a romantic heart's breath away...what a perfect offering for us today..thank you.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

When you whisper love poetry, you are shouting to the world. This poem is so "readable." You parlayed one line into the next with professional aplomb annd with a lovers heart. The result? Exquisite poetry.

Reviewed by ronald genise

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Tingling