Weights of Love (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jerry gray (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2006

Your devotion and energy are admirable. Your feelings are deeply and honestly felt. Unfortunately, dearie, verse and poetry are very different animals. Instead of scratching out a lame effort every single day, why not focus on one good poem at a time.
Edit! Revise! For God's sake, lose those archaic rhyme schemes.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

I have some things like this in my life that refuse to die, or move into another sphere of awareness.

If our thought processes were always light and carefree, and we didn't have these challenges that aggravated and tormented the soul, I don't believe our art and writing would have any depth. It would be as two-dimensional as a piece of paper.

You always provoke me to think, and you do seem to touch places in my life where I've had similar experiences. This was excellent!

Peace out Dixie-Bud ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Oh Susan my own heart goes out to you after reading this one. Your pain and longing to be loved and to love are so strong hearted and I hate to see you blue. Big hug coming your way.

Fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

To not be able to give up love as easily as it has been given up on us is a tragic way to have to go through life. I have been there, and even now, there are still soft twinges when a certain phrase or word is spoken around me, but at least it isn't a scream anymore. Very good poem.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

When there are obstacles in a love relationship, it is painful; yet love just doesn't die because of that.

Lovely expression!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

When obstacles are in the way. . . . . .
It's time to say. . . .
Can't we fly above. . .
the 'Weights of Love'
Excellent Poem
DWB

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Never too late to find your true soul mate..

Thanks for such a powerful review...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Susan you have voiced my sentiments as if you knew them! Talk about being connected. This is a flawless gem of a poem in my book! Take a bow!

Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Another powerful piece, Susan - Love truly can be a heavy weight, if we let it.

Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Suasn,

I love when you sing the blues - so poignant and close to the heart.
Well crafted. Touching - will share.

Linda

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Susan

Only God can move those mountains..
Get on the hotline to him...;)
Introspective and analytical pen
Shalom
Peter