May we all experience this type of passion in our lifetimes. Deeply sensual and moving!
Be well,
Penny

The passion that lives in you is reflected here.

Ron

Just awesomely HOT!!

Love Tinka

god, you have such class, Susan, let alone such a gift for Poetry and defining ever so human emotions in your special way...
and you should be Loved, by the way...
wish I was on more, am moving soon and some glitches, but sigh...
this was a pleasure as are you!
You, well...so gifted and yes, classy, indeed as well...
Hoping as the Autumn comes through, may get in more...
Love,
michelina
Susan----> Una Bella, bella Poeta!!!!! ;) :)
many thanks for all your support also, whether i am here much at all or not, you Rock (as the kids say!)
((((((((((((((((((((((((S.deV.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Who could not be persuaded by this wonderfully romantic and sensual piece.

Paul;-)

Finding someone whom you can truly love and be truly loved by is beginning to resemble an old wilted effigy of idealistic days.

Do people know how to really love, and respect, and nourish, and support each other through thick and thin anymore?

And committment ... seems to be the rudder that fell off the Mayflower on her second voyage.

If you have been blessed with a soul mate with whom you can share life's trials and tribulations through the thick and thin in sickness and in health till death do you part ... then you are truly blessed.

Nothing else much matters!

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Ah, persuade me slowly. Is there anyone out there who wishes to persuade another to love them anymore? I truly enjoyed this poem, Susan. It's quite graceful. ~~Nordette

Quite a poem and picture, Susan.

Beautifully captures a sense of controlled fervour. Kathy.

I think love is meant to be savored, never rushed. What a joy it would be to share a love like this. Such a sweet and wonderful write. Pierre.

The romance in this is sizzling!

A very sweet romantic write

~~Susan~~this poem is lovely in delight and spirit..beautiful poem~~

~~martin~~

what a sexy write! I very much enjoyed...

Susan

Ohhhhh have you got it right...Sis you know the words to match the act, and say them just right! oo la la...got me going Dusan;-)Eileen

The more that lovin lasts the more the climax intensifies. Take it from a woman to spell this out.

Susan,
An article could be written on this don't you think?

You gotta love Jerry's reference to "Slow Hand". He's exactly right This one oozes the passion and that "oooooh baby make me beg for you" kind of unrushed love in elegant hearts and flowers words of romance or even just plain sensual lust. Doesn't take many words to hit home with this one.
Hope they're taking it all in and reading very carefully!
Well done GF.
Love,
Taylor

OK, Seya behind the bike shed after skool...

Susan

You have said it all..
If the recipient of your attentions can't understand this, then he is not up to the mark !
Very expressive write

Love and Prayers

Peter

This is what is called "taking the bull by the horns" (literally). The tone of this message poetry has been written and sang about (remember "Slow Hand," by Conway Twitty?). Still, after all of those attempts to control the lovin', this one comes closest to succeeding because of the passion (however subdued) of the one who wrote it. Ya said a lot in eight verses, M'Lady.

Without wasting any words this one evokes a sensuality that only you could elicit so easily. It is passion, love, longing, desire, lust and kindness all rolled into one. This is the best.

Hugs,
Fee